Comments: 21
Geranio342 [2019-07-15 08:05:22 +0000 UTC]
The backstory makes he sound like kinda like an anti hero, fighting the heros due to the diferences between their plans and Atlas agenda
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C0lorman [2018-03-25 23:40:08 +0000 UTC]
Is that Whiplash from Iron Man?
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Hideki326 [2017-05-17 10:50:49 +0000 UTC]
is he a android or is it just a suit?
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warnett [2015-10-14 01:00:21 +0000 UTC]
How cool can you possibly get?!
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Onisatsu18 [2015-09-11 19:00:25 +0000 UTC]
Awesome!
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mercury7x [2015-08-18 13:39:15 +0000 UTC]
Lemme guess...
"Father" gave him his suit and his weapon, but gave him instructions on some specific way to use it. He disobeyed, and as such some tragedy occurred that was completely his fault, traumatizing him into whatever personality or character flaws you have set out for him?
This is not a condescending rant, this is a legitimate assumption I have about your character based around the myth of Icarus and the very little I've gleamed from the info given. The Greek myths are filled with excellent potential for RWBY bases, and Icarus and Dardalus are two of the best. I'm just wondering how much you followed it, if at all.
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MyRynoRunsHot In reply to mercury7x [2015-08-18 14:12:21 +0000 UTC]
Honestly, I haven't figured out that much backstory for this guy. I have some ideas but mostly small stuff.
Also based on the comments I might be a running joke that everyone assumes he's a robot.
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mercury7x In reply to MyRynoRunsHot [2015-08-18 14:46:18 +0000 UTC]
Some of it is the lack of skin, I'm sure, but for me I looked at his neck. If it looks like a thin metal bar compared to the head (which it does here) or is nonexistent (think drones or something) I assume it isn't a real head attached.
And really, a backstory as in-depth as a fully fleshed character requires will take time and effort, and constant revising. It's by far the hardest thing to make for any character simply because it is everything they are up to that point in time. I suggest you keep the details simple and small until you really figure out some deep plot-inducing history for him. Don't go too wild with the big picture until you have some dots to connect it to first.
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B-kit1n4m3rika [2015-08-18 05:13:45 +0000 UTC]
cool design. kinda like a power rangers villain.
and ruby could use some more robots/cyborgs.
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robchen96 [2015-08-18 01:45:05 +0000 UTC]
everybody thought it was a robot, because it don't look like human at all
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Raptor-Comics [2015-08-17 19:39:36 +0000 UTC]
So I'm sure, it's a guy in armor right?
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robchen96 In reply to Raptor-Comics [2015-08-18 01:44:03 +0000 UTC]
same thought, i even think that was a anti-huntsmen droid.
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