TheMoorMaiden [2012-07-09 23:07:17 +0000 UTC]
I love the every-day, blunt, gritty nature of the narrator; it really gave the piece character, and set it apart from other drink-based poems which can sometimes become rather predictable and melodramatic. I love the line: 'the aftertaste of life back into my mouth.' Great work!
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MyBlankInfinity In reply to TheMoorMaiden [2012-07-10 05:13:52 +0000 UTC]
thanks I'm glad you liked it.I love that line too.
TheMoorMaiden In reply to MyBlankInfinity [2012-07-10 10:40:38 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome.
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