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Published: 2012-03-25 21:21:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 10422; Favourites: 146; Downloads: 0
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Hope you like it and commenting!
PS: color edited onΒ February 1st 2017 ^^
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Thanks! Glad you like it! (:
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not a problem!!
I can speak some Spanish. 
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Haha! Buenas noches, seΓ±orita! Yo estoy bien, ΒΏy usted? xDD
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Muy bien, senor, !gracias! ?De donde eres? (please correct me if i make mistakes)
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ThereΒ΄re no mistakes (:
I make a lot of mistake speaking english so... xDD
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well, it's only to be expected.
let me see...uno hermano y hermana....? (i have one brother and one sister)
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Quieres decir que tienes un hermano y una hermana?
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I have not understood the last one you said xD
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i was trying to say that i have one brother and one sister, but i am not sure how to say that in Spanish.
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Ah! xDD
"Tengo un hermano/hermana" ^^
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ahhh....okay.
how do you say, "my brother is so annoying"?
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"Mi hermano estΓ‘ muy molesto" ^^
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haha!!! Gracias
?como estas?
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Yo estoy bien y tu?
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muy bien, !gracias! ?de donde eres?
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Yo soy de EspaΓ±a. ΒΏY tΓΊ?
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ItΒ΄s a beautiful place ^^
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thank you! but now it's ugly because we're having a stupid DROUGHT
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Thanks for that compliment xDD Someday in the future... Truly IΒ΄d like to work in Disney, but I think is a dream nowadays.
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She sleeps with a teddy? Like a teddy bear? How is that possible? There aren't any bears under the OMG SEA-BEARS!!
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Haha it's not a teddy bear...I think in the Little Mermaid 3 she sleeps with a teddy seahorse xDD
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I don't think so... But who knows? xDD
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Love it! Although I do think there are some mistakes... In the last panel:
Leave us to the big girls.
That confused me Isn't is supposed to be leave IT to the big girls?
And
Speak the girl who still sleeps.....
I think that should be SAYS the girl who....
Just two things I noticed. If you want I can help out in the future, I have quite a few friends who don't speak english as a first language and are always asking me to make sure their english is gramatically correct.
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If you help me would be fantastic! I have many grammatical errors. The problem is when I put the words in a comic... I don't know how I must to say them. Could you correct this page? If you want, of course
And glad you like the comic!
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Sure What font did you use? So I make sure to use the same one.
I'll make corrections when I get off of school today. Just send me a note when the next page is done and I will help with corrections as well.
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I use "komika jam". Ok, I'll let you know when the next page is ready.
And thanks again, you're very kind! (:
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No problem. I really want to work with books when I graduate. I want to work in the writting and editing business, so it is just practice. ^.^
My email is chii1015@gmail.com
Can you email me this file? and I will edit the few errors in this one. I'll email the edited version back and then you can update it.
I downloaded the font so I am read when ever you are. Glad I can help it give me something to do/ look forward to on those long school days.
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I repeat that you're so kind! But I think is more easy if you put here the correct translation and I change then. I think is better, don't you?
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Alrighty then, What I suggest you change is in between the bullets. Pannels I numbered by how you read the comic.
Pannel 1: But there was a time when both worlds didn't know 
Panel 2: Perfect the way it is
Panel 3: ...the relationship between our cities
Panel 4: Perfectly fine
Panel 5: I have a feeling that
Pannel 6: Perfectly fine
Pannel 7: 1st bubble Andrina - Rumor has it that there's a
Pannel 7: 2nd bubble Aquata - If he
(Now you can put the next sentence in two different ways) (1) Leave
Pannel 7: 3rd bubble Arista -
There are all the changes. Sorry there're long.
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