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MoxieMora — Reflection
Published: 2011-05-31 19:23:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 162; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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Description Like a burning ache inside
it fills me up, consumes
all of me, in its wake
only to be left
wanting more

reaching out
reaching in
same story
from the beginning
nowhere left to hide

I want you
I need you
I feel you
why can't I see you?
Are you real
or just a reflection

almost reached the end
same as it began
burning inside
and aching for more
can we go on
like this til dawn?
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Comments: 6

WillowOaken [2011-06-02 15:28:52 +0000 UTC]

Very nicely done

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MoxieMora In reply to WillowOaken [2011-06-02 15:48:23 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Iplywittrees [2011-06-01 22:26:39 +0000 UTC]

Very emotional. I definitely get the 'you're out of my reach, and we're not sure it'll work, but can we make it?' vibe.

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MoxieMora In reply to Iplywittrees [2011-06-01 22:29:24 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. Well. Have to meet em first! But yeah. Ya got the vibe down.

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Iplywittrees In reply to MoxieMora [2011-06-01 23:11:10 +0000 UTC]

Cool. Yay critical reading!

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MoxieMora In reply to Iplywittrees [2011-06-01 23:55:32 +0000 UTC]

Yay!

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