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MotleyExistence In reply to kelseyleah [2017-08-26 17:55:22 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot for the support<3, Personally feel like I could of done better with this picture, in the end It felt a little rushed. Well compared to This earlier Picture thats of the same theme .

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kelseyleah In reply to MotleyExistence [2017-08-26 18:15:00 +0000 UTC]

Well, the picture of Stanya certainly is more detailed, it feels more sketchy and incomplete to me. I like how the vine frames Arita, and the pops of black give it more color range (where the grays in Stanya's picture are all close in shade, so it's harder for the eye to focus on any one thing).
There's also a clear light source in Arita's picture. I can see in some areas in Arita's picture you didn't exactly stay in the lines, but it's really not that noticeable unless you stare for a while.
I think you have a really good grasp of anatomy in both pictures, and you draw the characters with a lot of personality, too!

Sorry for the sudden critique you didn't ask for. In the end, you're the artist and what's important is if you like it and had fun doing it!

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MotleyExistence In reply to kelseyleah [2017-08-26 18:44:34 +0000 UTC]

Lol need to apologizes, It's really refreshing to get someone evaluate some of my work  

I do have to say I think the direction I was going with this was good, but I recall at some point just before cleaning up the lines and shading/colouring, I just really wanted it finished so I could stop drawing, I could of just took a break but in the end I rushed something that could of been a lot better.
Thank you for the comment on the anatomy, I've been focusing a lot on that recently, although sometimes I wiff on it, I'm definitely getting a better understanding of it.
And yeah been slowly trying to work on my lighting and shading a bit, I like it bolder and more defined like this, but somehow keep sleeking back to that softer look like in the Stanya picture.

Thank you so much for this Critique, I tent not to ask for them even though I love it and find it helpful, even to discuss issues I'm aware of. This has kinda push me a little to probably increase the standard of work I upload, and stop being lazy and uploading rushed work.

Thanks again, and I would hope to hear some feedback from you in the future if possible. 

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kelseyleah In reply to MotleyExistence [2017-08-27 06:19:45 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad it wasn't a bother!

I'm the same way- I like critiques, but I don't ask for them. Probably 'cause I'm overly critical of myself.
But if you'd like feedback, I may bother you again.

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MotleyExistence In reply to kelseyleah [2017-08-27 06:22:47 +0000 UTC]

I'm looking forward to it  

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