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Published: 2009-10-20 00:52:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 121; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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I wish I could enjoy the snow,but things won't stay the same.
What once was sugar coated cold,
now resembles icy tears.
I wish I had somewhere to go,
you left just like you came.
I'm left with no ones hand to hold,
to face my favored, bitter fears.
I wish I could enjoy the snow,
the snow that I once knew.
I wish I could relive our time.
Step by step, word by word.
I wish that you could always know,
the things you make me do.
We'll stay up late to pass the time,
step by step, rhyme by rhyme.
We'll stay up late and do our time,
In this icy snow.
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You're welcome
We really need to meet on gmail.
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pretty good :]
would add an effect if you separated your lines into stanza's. just a thought though :]
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Thank you!
I will do so. I'm used to writing songs, and I generally don't do that, but since it's spoken word, I will.
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