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Description Theresa felt really bad about what she had said to Jack, but had found out the hard way that usually when people said they cared, the didn't. She had really loved making the snowman and talking with him, and had a ton of questions she wanted to ask him, but had held back so she wouldn't freak him out.

As she sat in class, answering every question, behaving the way that the teachers expected her to, she found that she was very upset. It was not odd for her to push people away, since they always disappointed her, but she had not meant to say that to him. It had just come out. She wanted to run outside and find him to apologize, but figured he would probably be gone by the next break.

The teacher handed out a math quiz, which Theresa finished half an hour before the time was up, the first one done. She normally did not draw anything on any of her paper, but this time found herself drawing a picture of her and Jack finishing the snowman. Well, really it was a short female stick figure with long hair and a male stick figure with messy hair next to three circles. With a sigh she held up her hand and the teacher took the test, seeing the picture she was surprised, but did not say anything.

Theresa looked out the window, hoping to see Jack like she had before, but all she saw was the field. She was about to grab her book and start reading when she saw some junior high kids come into view and head right for one of the many snowmen that the kids had built.

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Jack had wanted to go after Theresa, but thought better of it. He would stick around until the last break and tell her that pity was not the reason he had spent so much time with her. But once again, he had no clue when the kids had their last break, in an hour? Two? He decided to fly up into one of the trees and take a nap.

He had not been asleep long when he heard laughing, but this was not the laughter of kids having fun. He sat up in his perch and looked around, it was not hard to find the source of the laughs. A bunch of kids, maybe 13 or 14 years old. They were obviously skipping school, not that Jack cared about that. He watched the teen boys push each other around, into snowbanks and laugh, suddenly one of them pointed at one of the snowmen.

While he and Theresa had built theirs, many other kids had followed suit with the idea, their were about two dozen snowmen in all, maybe a little more. They were all at different stages of completion and all were different sizes, some already had arms, a few had faces made out of whatever the kids could find (left over vegetables for the most part) while others like his and Theresas were missing a part. Some were barely a foot tall, others were so tall that Jack had been impressed that a bunch of little kids had managed to make them.

Jack floated down from the branch, not sure what to expect but he had a fairly good idea. The boys headed over to the snowman that had been pointed at, this was one of the smaller ones, about two feet high in total, and stepped on it. The boys looked at the windows of the school, some of the kids must have been looking out because they stuck their tongues out toward the school.

"Hey!" Jack yelled, knowing they couldn't hear or see him. He was hurrying towards the group, but was really not sure what he could do.

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Theresa gasped involuntarily as she saw the little snowman get smashed. The class, always looking for a distraction, looked first at her and then followed her gaze to the window.

"Our snowman" A pair of girls cried out as they saw the boys knock down another one and roll it's pieces away. One of them tried to break the middle with his foot but just stubbed his toe.

Theresa was the only one to see why, right before the kick landed she saw Jack freeze the part where the foot would have hit, protecting the orb of snow.

"Everyone, look back at your paper and be quiet, I'll phone the office and the Principle will handle this" The teacher said, closing the blind. The last thing Theresa saw was one of the boys knocking down her and Jacks snowman.

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The boys had spread out, knocking down every snowman and trying to kick the pieces into bits. Some of the heads got smashed while Jack wasn't looking, but he managed to save most of the larger pieces.

"What's wrong with you?" He said, stopping a bottom from being smashed, "The kids at this school had so much fun building these and then you come along and break them apart!" He turned around in time to see them push over his and Theresas snowman. "Oh that's it" He said, glaring, he made the ice on the pieces so hard that the boy actually yelled in pain. Jack knew it was a rotten thing to do, but so was smashing snowmen.

One of the other boys looked up from the mini-snowman he had stepped on while Jack had been busy, "Hey, you ok?" He called

"Just fine" He said, and spit on the snowman.

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"Yeah, the kids are upset over it" Theresa heard her teacher say into the phone, trying to keep her voice down, "I know, but can anyone go stop them? They look like they should be in school right now" She paused, listening to the other person on the phone, "My class is writing a test, I can't leave... hold on one second" She looked up from the phone "Eyes on your own paper, Frank" She said, giving the giggling class a quick look before tuning back to the phone, "Ok, thanks, I'm sure the kids will be happy"

Theresa, who at this point would normally be reading a book, was looking right at her teacher. The teacher walked over to the window, giving the class a quick glance to make sure no one was cheating, peaked out the window. Theresa got up and moved over to the teacher.

"Can I look?" She asked "I was building one and want to see if they smashed it..."

"No, Theresa, I'm sorry, you'll have to wait until recess like everyone else." The teacher said, "Now go sit, other people are still writing" With a slight nod Theresa did as she was told.

After a few moments the teacher turned away from the window.

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Jack was doing his best to protect the snowmen, but non-the-less, by this point all the mini-snowmen had been stomped on and most of the others had been broken apart, only two or three were left standing by the time an older man came around the side of the school, yelling.

"Hey! Get back to your own schools! If I get over there and find out who you are you'll be in big trouble" He trudged through the snow towards the boys, who immediately started to run, slipping on ice Jack formed under them with a smirk. They all managed to get away anyway, but there was nothing more for Jack to do.

With a sigh he walked over towards the tree he had been in before, "Where do you think you're going, young man?" With a start Jack turned around and started at the man, who was looking right at him.
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Comments: 47

Super-Juliamon [2012-12-10 02:59:42 +0000 UTC]

That guy can see him!?!? This needs an explanation! (great chapter btw, loved it )

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moonpuppy4 In reply to Super-Juliamon [2012-12-10 03:33:58 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, and you don't get much of one, he's like that you get a bit but even Jack isn't all that satisfied with it. I'm not fond of the next chapter, but I guess I'll see what you guys think.

Thanks, I personally feel it is the best one so far. ^^

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Super-Juliamon In reply to moonpuppy4 [2012-12-10 04:30:11 +0000 UTC]

So he's just some random guy who happens to see Jack? Cool XD

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moonpuppy4 In reply to Super-Juliamon [2012-12-10 04:33:19 +0000 UTC]

Well, no, he's the principle, and over 40 years old, it would be kinda weird if he saw Jack and was just some random guy. But the explanation he gives is a little odd, for a reason, and you find out a bit more in the part after the next part... Namely why Theresa actually believes in Jack XD but that's not for two days.

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Super-Juliamon In reply to moonpuppy4 [2012-12-10 22:29:11 +0000 UTC]

Ohh... okay (I guess I'll wait then)

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moonpuppy4 In reply to Super-Juliamon [2012-12-11 05:12:20 +0000 UTC]

well, ok, in the epilog, maybe... Who knows, I may just elude to it and keep you guys guessing.

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SapphieTaffy [2012-12-09 21:46:38 +0000 UTC]

You're right. I did hate how this one ended. :'D WHY, CLIFFHANGER? WHYYY?
Love it. But why can the guy see Jack .F!? SO EXCITEDDDD

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moonpuppy4 In reply to SapphieTaffy [2012-12-10 01:01:21 +0000 UTC]

I knew you would. Because it's better that way.
You shall see...

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SapphieTaffy In reply to moonpuppy4 [2012-12-10 01:14:26 +0000 UTC]

Squeeeeal!

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moonpuppy4 In reply to SapphieTaffy [2012-12-10 01:18:08 +0000 UTC]

I'm still writing it, not sure how to write this one well...

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SapphieTaffy In reply to moonpuppy4 [2012-12-10 01:40:32 +0000 UTC]

Well I hope it comes out to your liking c:

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moonpuppy4 In reply to SapphieTaffy [2012-12-10 01:44:19 +0000 UTC]

It's real dialog heavy and not going to be the best of the chapters, but will give some insight to Theresa, who, I have discovered, is no longer really based off me XD well, as much as she originally was.

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SapphieTaffy In reply to moonpuppy4 [2012-12-10 02:29:22 +0000 UTC]

That's awesome, development! Getting more fictional in a way.

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moonpuppy4 In reply to SapphieTaffy [2012-12-10 03:36:58 +0000 UTC]

She has a similar past, but that's to be expected with her being me at the start of this, but then you throw in a guardian, make stuff worse for her by small amounts and it's a whole new person!

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SapphieTaffy In reply to moonpuppy4 [2012-12-10 06:35:22 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. LOL, if you throw a guardian into anything it makes everything better. XDDD Well that's part of the awesomeness of writing. x'D You're, basically the overlord of your whole world's existance and everything in it. So cool~

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moonpuppy4 In reply to SapphieTaffy [2012-12-10 06:41:34 +0000 UTC]

Yeah it's really fun and I've always liked writing. ^^ I find it easiest to write characters I relate to, so I find it easy to relate to Theresa since she's me as I remember parts of my childhood, but I know some of my memories are twisted and not 100% accurate, but for her they are, and gah dammit, if I can be happy when I'm older, she sure as heck is going to be!

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SapphieTaffy In reply to moonpuppy4 [2012-12-10 07:27:14 +0000 UTC]

I agree, I actually have this problem that when I create a character, they end up being too much like my others/myself. XP Just gotta work on ironing that little problem out, I guess! Yeah, same with my memories. And I find it annoying that I remember very small, insignificant little memory snippets from my childhood, then other things I can't remember at all. Its like my brain just auto-records at random intervals. But I want an explaination from Tooth! Why you you give me back these memories Toothiana?! What do I need them for, silly humming-fairy!

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moonpuppy4 In reply to SapphieTaffy [2012-12-10 07:30:30 +0000 UTC]

Well, maybe a baby tooth is messing with you, or you're just not getting the message. For me, I get random memories that sometimes make no sense to even be stored, but taken with other memories they become significant.
For example, when I lost my fist tooth.... oh, wait, I can't tell you that, it's the memory that's prompting my Toothina tribute!

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SapphieTaffy In reply to moonpuppy4 [2012-12-10 20:16:54 +0000 UTC]

Eep! I'm anticipating the next Guardian tribute already! XD
I'm probably not grasping their meaning, but I wouldn't put it past Baby Tooth either way.

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moonpuppy4 In reply to SapphieTaffy [2012-12-10 20:28:50 +0000 UTC]

Tooths isn't for a while, the epilogue has something in it that will be confusing until I post the Santa one (This girl is special, apparently) So that will be next, then I will either do Tooth or Pitch, my ideas for Bunnymund are... iffy, to say the least.

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SapphieTaffy In reply to moonpuppy4 [2012-12-10 21:18:23 +0000 UTC]

Ohhh! I see. So, are they all going to be based on childhood memories? Sounds like these are gonna be fun to read. ^^

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moonpuppy4 In reply to SapphieTaffy [2012-12-10 21:25:47 +0000 UTC]

Well, Pitch's and Bunny's aren't. But other then that, yeah, more or less

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SapphieTaffy In reply to moonpuppy4 [2012-12-10 22:32:29 +0000 UTC]

Thats cool, I'm looking forward to more of your stories

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DarkShadowMagik [2012-12-09 19:26:11 +0000 UTC]

I love it~ The poor snow people was distroyed...
OH! Btw. . . *gives cookie for your pun*

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moonpuppy4 In reply to DarkShadowMagik [2012-12-10 01:02:41 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, it really sucks...
*hangs head in shame of pun, but takes the cookie* Waaaiiit, the elves didn't lick this, did they?

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DarkShadowMagik In reply to moonpuppy4 [2012-12-10 01:21:54 +0000 UTC]

Of course not! I got it from a freshly open package from a regular grocery store~
^^

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moonpuppy4 In reply to DarkShadowMagik [2012-12-10 01:23:19 +0000 UTC]

Ok, good *eats cookie* If you're lying you'll end up on the naughty list. ^^

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DarkShadowMagik In reply to moonpuppy4 [2012-12-10 01:47:51 +0000 UTC]

Im not~ ^^ Im trying to be good so I can ask Santa to send Jack Frost to my house as a present~ LOL

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moonpuppy4 In reply to DarkShadowMagik [2012-12-10 01:54:15 +0000 UTC]

I... don't think he could do that. Maybe a Jack Frost plush toy? XD might be short notice. If you ask for that a yeti might flip a table.

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DarkShadowMagik In reply to moonpuppy4 [2012-12-10 01:56:28 +0000 UTC]

He could~ ^^ He just might not give me that. . . If he cant then I'll ask for that plushie~

Yeti: *flips table and rages*
Me: o-o

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moonpuppy4 In reply to DarkShadowMagik [2012-12-10 02:08:36 +0000 UTC]

... Now you've done it! Go and apologize! lol

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DarkShadowMagik In reply to moonpuppy4 [2012-12-10 02:13:37 +0000 UTC]

I sowwy~ -puppy face- *puts back the table and cleans up*

lol

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moonpuppy4 In reply to DarkShadowMagik [2012-12-10 03:34:55 +0000 UTC]

*yeti grunts and goes back to work* I think that means he accepts the apology, but not to expect the plush toy...

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DarkShadowMagik In reply to moonpuppy4 [2012-12-10 05:19:45 +0000 UTC]

Aww. . . NEW PLAN! Kidnap Jack if I don't get him for Christmas~
xD Yes, I'm that crazy. . haha

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moonpuppy4 In reply to DarkShadowMagik [2012-12-10 05:25:04 +0000 UTC]

That idea probably just earned you a spot on the naughty list, and North telling Jack that another fan girl was out to get him.

He sees you when your sleeping
He knows when your awake
He knows if you've been bad or good
*keeps singing*

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DarkShadowMagik In reply to moonpuppy4 [2012-12-10 05:41:25 +0000 UTC]

xD
I want a plushie or ornament at least~

''He sees you when your sleeping
He knows when your awake
He knows if you've been bad or good''
That makes North sound like a stalker xD

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moonpuppy4 In reply to DarkShadowMagik [2012-12-10 05:46:32 +0000 UTC]

Well, when's your birthday?

"So BE GOOD for goodness sake
Oh you better watch out
you better not cry
you better not shout
I'm telling you why
Santa Clause is coming... to town!"
Remember, he is a Russian master swordsman with two swords.

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DarkShadowMagik In reply to moonpuppy4 [2012-12-10 05:51:13 +0000 UTC]

December 15.. Soo... Soon~ Ahh I'm such an old fart xD not really

I know he is~
AND THATS SCARY!! XD

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moonpuppy4 In reply to DarkShadowMagik [2012-12-10 05:57:02 +0000 UTC]

Oh, well, that doesn't help, I'm not sure when Rise of the Guardian stuff will be available... Who knows, maybe it already is, I don't pay attention to this stuff... (I'm asking for the books for Christmas)

Only for naughty people like you, for people like me that stay on the nice list, it's reassurance.

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DarkShadowMagik In reply to moonpuppy4 [2012-12-10 06:06:12 +0000 UTC]

OH! I remember what happens next now in the movie!
Ok, Tooth explains that the teeth contains memories and stuff (i have vague memory xD)... Um. . . Jack want to get his memories before he died.. Then. . . OH! The Guardians help Tooth collect the teeth from the children (they act like its a competition) and when they all stop by to collect Jamie's tooth that fell out out, because of the incedent with Jack earlier... *facepalm* Ok then. . . they make alot of noise argueing, waking up Jamie. Then the Guardians get caught...

That is far as I know right now. . .

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moonpuppy4 In reply to DarkShadowMagik [2012-12-10 06:18:21 +0000 UTC]

.... ooookkkaaayyy, I'm going to assume that was meant for a different conversation?

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DarkShadowMagik In reply to moonpuppy4 [2012-12-10 06:19:29 +0000 UTC]

yes it was... T-T

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moonpuppy4 In reply to DarkShadowMagik [2012-12-10 06:22:20 +0000 UTC]

lol, I've done that. Oh, hey look I posted part 5 XD I decided I didn't want to wait and post it tomorrow cause it sucks anyway... The next part is much better.

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DarkShadowMagik In reply to moonpuppy4 [2012-12-10 15:22:08 +0000 UTC]

Ok! I've noticed part 5 already. I'll read it later haha~ I'll look forward to them

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moonpuppy4 In reply to DarkShadowMagik [2012-12-10 20:25:03 +0000 UTC]

And now part 6 is up XD I should start writing the epilogue...

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DarkShadowMagik In reply to moonpuppy4 [2012-12-11 00:13:08 +0000 UTC]

WHOO!!

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DarkShadowMagik In reply to DarkShadowMagik [2012-12-10 06:15:58 +0000 UTC]

FUUDDGGEEE WRONG DEVIATION TO SEND THIS TO!! *IGNORE THAT ^^^^ IF YOU HAVENT WATCHED THE MOVIE*

GAAHHHH JUST KILL ME NAOW

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