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ShadowCaller9 [2013-08-11 05:52:46 +0000 UTC]
I wish I had started reading your fan fictions sooner then this, anyway it is a good prologue. I liked the suspense you made with Theresa being bullied *1. I had my suspicions that she was due to both a loss of hope and having 1 friend but I still found myself reading more to find out for certain. You did a good job at teasing me to continue reading
1* if Teresa is a main character in the official series then I wouldn't know as I have not read the books yet.
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moonpuppy4 In reply to ShadowCaller9 [2013-08-11 06:08:51 +0000 UTC]
she's not, she's an OC and it's nice to hear, thanks.
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SapphieTaffy [2012-12-26 07:15:20 +0000 UTC]
Yaaay~! So lucky to get this tonight xD (You should feel good Bunny, she managed to squeeze Easter related stuff into Christmas! Beat that North, lol no I'm joking you're epic too)
Muahaha, I kneeew it. <3 And yeah, I don't have super big memories of Easter either, but I remember the happy, peaceful mornings and the egg\chocolate hunts x3
I really liked this! And I like how you write about Bunny. Excited for more and Merry Christmas!
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SapphieTaffy In reply to moonpuppy4 [2012-12-27 02:21:46 +0000 UTC]
Hehe, yay!
Yeah me too, I think we can thank Jack for that. I love egg painting though~! ^^
You seem to be doing a good job so far. c: And no problem!
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moonpuppy4 In reply to SapphieTaffy [2012-12-27 05:28:51 +0000 UTC]
Egg painting is really fun!
Well he doesn't really talk in this part lol It's hard to tell a characters real persona vs their projected persona in a movie. Like North with his doll...
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moonpuppy4 In reply to SapphieTaffy [2012-12-27 06:41:14 +0000 UTC]
Though RotG was really good at making characters that were multi-layered and realistic.
Hey look, the next part's up!
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moonpuppy4 In reply to SapphieTaffy [2012-12-27 09:59:17 +0000 UTC]
I think we may have made Shrek mad XD
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SapphieTaffy In reply to moonpuppy4 [2012-12-27 20:47:08 +0000 UTC]
*Sneaks away quickly to do the same*
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moonpuppy4 In reply to Jackie-SugarSkull [2012-12-26 05:58:45 +0000 UTC]
Bunny is going to be harder to write than the others are v.v well, Tooth would be fairly hard to write too, buuuut in what I'm thinking of doing for Theresa with Tooth, she won't even be in it lol
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moonpuppy4 In reply to Jackie-SugarSkull [2012-12-26 06:12:28 +0000 UTC]
oh, it's fun, no doubt about that, I'm just not sure how fast I'll be able to write stuff I'm happy with, which means I might not update as soon as I'd like... I'd rather have all the fan fics done before the winter break is over and they keep running away with me soo, yeah ^^ I am DETERMINED to make at least one a one shot! Though Pitch, Tooth and Sandy will probably all be one shots...lol that's still three more plus the end of this one XD and who knows if I'll write more! I don't.
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