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MoonlightStrider In reply to Woody897 [2014-12-08 16:57:08 +0000 UTC]
Thanks Woody, I'm pleased you like it.
I've been wanting to do backgrounds for a while, I figured it'd make the piece more eye catching (The poster was something i'm proud of myself).
Yeah, sorry about that I just wanted to clear up any confusion regarding the matter, I once got confused at one point when I was asked by an Kevindragon on FA about whether or not Lycaon should be Planti or Digitgrade for a piece I commissioned off him.
I'm still getting used to FOV in my drawings, I've done it in the past with work like thisΒ Sly The Tasmanian Beefcake Β so I guess it might be rust? (Sorry if I'm making excuses)
I'll admit, I messed up big time with the waist position also I wasn't going for a muscle gut, I got worried that if I erased the abs too much it'd ruin the paper.
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Woody897 In reply to MoonlightStrider [2014-12-08 22:20:50 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad I could be of help.
Perspective is always hard to get right; even for someone with loads of experience. It's just one of those things that you learn to improve and develop over time.
The waist is also hard to get right. Then again... All body parts are. Just like everything in art; it improves with time.
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MoonlightStrider In reply to Woody897 [2014-12-08 22:28:06 +0000 UTC]
The same can be said with any hobby, if you don't take time to practice, you ain't going far.
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RykertheWolf [2014-12-08 02:52:05 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
This is definitely better than the last one you did, however, one thing bothers me about it: The face. It doesn't really look like how it's supposed to beβ¦it just sort of looks like a man with a snout on his face and sharp teeth, and the same goes for the poster in the background, the face just doesn't lookβ¦"wolfish" enough, if that makes any sense. Those are the only things I have problems with, but besides that, everything else is great! The muscles and anatomy look good! It really does look like he's flexing for a picture of himself to admire! One suggestion though, practice just a BIT more, his right bicep looks a bit awkward when looking at the rest of his body as well, and try adding some more definition to the muscle so it looks like he's flexing as hard as he can! Maybe try adding some veins? Other than that, it's a great piece! Great job! You're really improving!
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pedrovaldezriveraba [2019-01-30 02:44:37 +0000 UTC]
Strike a poke my speedo-clad anthropomorphic muscular werewolf friend.
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DakotaWolf1996 [2014-12-08 11:57:47 +0000 UTC]
The lose looks nice and I feel the character looks better if there's a back round which you did,, over nice job ^^
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MoonlightStrider In reply to DakotaWolf1996 [2014-12-08 12:20:06 +0000 UTC]
Thanks dude, I've been wanting to do backgrounds for a while now.
What do you think of my character overall.
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DakotaWolf1996 In reply to MoonlightStrider [2014-12-08 15:46:36 +0000 UTC]
I think his right arm where is elbow is off, like i dont understand the line and what is is ^^" but overall very nice
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MoonlightStrider In reply to DakotaWolf1996 [2014-12-08 17:41:49 +0000 UTC]
I was trying to draw the forearm but it got a bit messed up.
also ^^ is meant to be ^_^ think of it as a really happy face
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Kensoudojo [2014-12-08 05:22:32 +0000 UTC]
yeah! looking good mate ^0^ awesome abs, abs, shoulders and quads bro!
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MoonlightStrider In reply to Kensoudojo [2014-12-08 10:10:15 +0000 UTC]
Thanks mate, I'm glad you like it, still need practice though.
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Dawn-Of-DarkSouls [2014-12-08 04:33:32 +0000 UTC]
The picture is good but you need to measure the body a little better, he's a bit off balance.
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CaliburWarrior [2014-12-08 00:33:03 +0000 UTC]
Nice work.
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MoonlightStrider In reply to kusanagiartist [2014-12-08 00:04:59 +0000 UTC]
I see, thanks for that, to be honest I've been feeling a bit rusty since I have been working nearly all weekend.
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