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chaolids [2018-01-24 19:35:14 +0000 UTC]
Finally! Someone who understands that fear isn't all bad!
Keep up the good work!
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sampea [2013-02-17 16:14:41 +0000 UTC]
it mades me feel less alone.
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EarlyRain [2012-11-25 15:09:47 +0000 UTC]
i am probably commenting 2 years late but i still wanted to comment and say that is a wonderful piece!
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leopard-atxheart [2011-02-01 04:34:25 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the submission. Really like this piece, the really basic down home of fear. -shudder- Nice.
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Phoenix-Ocean [2010-11-11 16:14:53 +0000 UTC]
That's brilliant, very meaningful and well thought-out. Keep writing! :hugs:
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Moonfox1781 In reply to Phoenix-Ocean [2010-11-11 16:17:27 +0000 UTC]
have you read my story "The Beast of Bray Road" yet?? :3
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Moonfox1781 In reply to Jez123 [2010-11-08 21:59:16 +0000 UTC]
*looks down* sorry..
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Jez123 In reply to Moonfox1781 [2010-11-08 22:49:41 +0000 UTC]
It's fine lol this is still super amazing!!(:
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erziban [2010-11-07 23:10:00 +0000 UTC]
this is very good over all; there are a few little tweaks you might make, in your seventh stanza,the last line would work better as" to an 'I love you'", read it out loud an see how it flows...that always helps me when I am working on mine! Nice job!
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Moonfox1781 In reply to erziban [2010-11-08 01:08:31 +0000 UTC]
*playing with my fingers, looking down* sorry..
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erziban In reply to Moonfox1781 [2010-11-08 02:15:53 +0000 UTC]
Oooooooh,crap...did I sound all lectury on you? I certainly didn't mean to! My bad!!!!!
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Moonfox1781 In reply to erziban [2010-11-08 02:27:25 +0000 UTC]
*smiles at you freaking out*
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Moonfox1781 In reply to erziban [2010-11-08 11:15:39 +0000 UTC]
lol, that made me feel better xD
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erziban In reply to Moonfox1781 [2010-11-09 00:31:36 +0000 UTC]
GASP? Out of breath, or shocked?
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Moonfox1781 In reply to erziban [2010-11-09 00:32:45 +0000 UTC]
i had a cupcake today :3
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erziban In reply to Moonfox1781 [2010-11-09 00:55:35 +0000 UTC]
MMMMMMM..............SUGAR
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Moonfox1781 In reply to erziban [2010-11-09 01:16:31 +0000 UTC]
that's how i felt x3
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erziban In reply to Moonfox1781 [2010-11-09 01:19:55 +0000 UTC]
I have a sugar thing too....it is my addiction
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Moonfox1781 In reply to erziban [2010-11-09 01:26:32 +0000 UTC]
want to know what my addiction is?... sleeping. when i do homework i swear it's my brains way of saying "HIBERNATION!"
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erziban In reply to Moonfox1781 [2010-11-09 01:29:28 +0000 UTC]
I wish I could sleep..I don't sleep well, so I'm always tired!
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Moonfox1781 In reply to erziban [2010-11-09 01:30:41 +0000 UTC]
same here. i gotta take sleeping pills sometimes
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Moonfox1781 In reply to erziban [2010-11-09 02:17:50 +0000 UTC]
lol, im not married xD i is just 15
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erziban In reply to Moonfox1781 [2010-11-09 02:21:12 +0000 UTC]
Well, get some sleep! You have no one annoying you all night! lol
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erziban In reply to Moonfox1781 [2010-11-10 01:04:11 +0000 UTC]
Why are we waiting a minute?
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Moonfox1781 In reply to erziban [2010-11-10 01:20:52 +0000 UTC]
lol, because I said so >:3
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erziban In reply to Moonfox1781 [2010-11-10 02:48:32 +0000 UTC]
YES MASTER........lol
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