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The next addition to the Epic Sandragon + Me commission work~ <3This one I did livestream for him to watch and angle me toward what he wanted from me exactly, it was a lot of fun, and an extra thanks to everyone who stopped by to watch :3
Hope you enjoy~~ Off to my busy busy weekend @_@
(c) Sandragon13
(c) Momo-Deary
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I'll write a quick one before I start my LoL game.
There's two things that stand out the most in this piece and it's the sandshrew and the sandstorm. The effect and the way you presented the sandstorm is quite spot on, I think, and on that note, so is the shading theme. [Take note the shadow on the ground for either individuals]
Next thing of positive note is the expression, which is also well-captured. You can obviously see the pokemon is content being in the sandstorm, as that's pretty much what it's used to. On the other hand, its trainer should've brought a veil. You can see he regrets not bringing one through his one-eyed frown.
Something to keep in mind; while there are some parts of a sandstorm that have blank spots, [i.e.: next to the trainer's face]
I think the direction [really minor! But I gotta nitpick at it to balance it out] of the brush makes it look like there's something in the trainer's back sucking the sand up. I'm probably missing something, but if I'm right, the negative space of the sandstorm should be horizontal, not vertical.
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I have to study sandstorms more now ;_; lolol Yeah, I didn't even notice how empty it looked behind him, unless he's just really fat from a different angle, blocking the sand from showing up behind him ;D Hahaha. Still not sure what you meant about the horizontal v vertical part, I'm wrapping my brain around that one, but I'm sure you're right Q_Q
I did end up erasing a lot of it around his face and the sandshrew D: only because I thought it blocked out what I wanted to show, but I could have thrown in some dusty lines too >_> Haha~
Thank you so much! :'3 Best critique I've had in a long time. You're very good at it (make me notice things I didn't see, CURSE YOU.) <3
On an additional note, you should add me on league XD I'm "Lizella" on there (it's addicting).
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;D I try.
On the horizontal and vertical part, I meant that the line of negative space [the part that's cleared out] seems to be sucked in. By this, I mean I imagine something sucking the dust from the bag, even though the bag's closed. Duststorms generally tend to go straight, and in this case, it should be horizontal instead of vertical.
Also, I just added you. 
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Ohhhhhhhhhh okay, lol that makes sense XD Yeah, I know what you mean now ;_; I think I did have it all across, but to highlight him I erased some, guess I didn't notice it would look that way, lol
Awww :'D Ima add you too~ Best critiquer ever~ <3
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Aye aye, captain~!! ;D
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Is that a Sandshrew? That is my all-time favorite Pokemon. I have officially crowned you the unnofficial artist of win. Such a title is not handed out every day, I kid you not.
Win. <3
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:'D *le gasp* What an honor!! <333 
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Magnificent! One of my favorites from the project so far. Perfect pose, great character design, and sublime execution.
-sandragon13
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:'3 Yay~!!! I'm glad you enjoyed the show, too! X3
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No kidding~?? Thank you! :'D
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"aww man, I knew I shouldn't have taught my Sandshrew sandstorm" :l
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And while he struggles to keep the sand out of his eyes, the little one just keeps walking along...
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Yay~!! Exactly XD lol, it's so corny, but I love when people understand the story behind a picture ;_;
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Has the pedo-van gone yet?
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XDDD YES ITS GONE! <3 Thank god :l
Thanks so much for coming ;_; NO ONE CARES AS MUCH AS YOU AND 3 OTHERS DOOO <333 Hahaha~
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You're quite welcome. ^-^
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