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Crashyfall [2021-05-07 21:17:19 +0000 UTC]
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Charlymander [2020-01-21 04:54:18 +0000 UTC]
Love it!
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Kettterer [2020-01-16 02:07:19 +0000 UTC]
May I critique?
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Modeerfwon In reply to Kettterer [2020-01-16 03:13:28 +0000 UTC]
As the description implies, anyone is free to critique
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Kettterer In reply to Modeerfwon [2020-01-16 12:36:59 +0000 UTC]
Here goes: I hope I critique is okay.
Starting off, the group of Yoshis in the image are just too cute. Although some of their proportions between different ones are a bit inconsistent, unless, of course, that was the intent.
For the purple mountains, I like the blur, but I would have their colour fade a bit more to give them a better atmospheric perspective.
I'm glad you added shading on the bushes and gave a more distinctive colour to the grass. But some of the shading parts of the bush appear too dark. More specifically the bushes behind the Yoshi group.
The apples are okay, but I somehow feel like you copy and paste them. Don't be afraid to give each apple a bit of different shading, tint, colour, angle, etc. I'd make each of them a bit different for more realism.
That's pretty much all I have to say, thanks for accepting critiques.
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Modeerfwon In reply to Kettterer [2020-01-17 21:16:19 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for giving your critique.
I was going to add the variety of colored Yoshi but I somehow didn't, I may do so in future drawings tho.
I supposed your right about the mountains while they do look great, I should've fade the colors a little bit more to give it a full mountain-like atmosphere.
As for the bushes, I can kinda see why you mentioned them being too dark.
The shadows on top of the Yoshis might've caused the bushes to have a darker tone to them.
I guess I should try being cautious with shadows next time.
I'd figure you'd mention the apples.
May as well admit the fact that I did indeed copy and paste them.
I agree that it is a bit lazy to copy the exact same objects numerous times, It's on the same level as using any shape tools to make anything really.
Again you are correct, I suppose playing around with the features for them would help make the artwork stand out.
This is my first time doing backgrounds in awhile since the few last pieces with them.
I like doing new things when it comes to drawing, so I appreciate the constructive criticism. I'll be sure to keep those tips in mind when drawing stuff.
Your critique is fine, so you're alright ^^
Again thank you for your honest, helpful criticism.
Have a great day!
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Kettterer In reply to Modeerfwon [2020-01-17 22:59:43 +0000 UTC]
Oh, thanks for the great (and surprisingly) long mature response. I kind of regretting sending my critique, thinking that I was too harsh on you or you mistaking my criticism for hate. Thanks so much.
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Modeerfwon In reply to AltairYoshi [2020-01-17 21:17:07 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, I appreciate the feedback ^^
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Modeerfwon In reply to blueyoshiegg [2020-01-17 21:18:27 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, all of them are my favorite part of the drawing honestly ^^
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TheRainbowStar77 [2020-01-15 22:10:47 +0000 UTC]
Spectacular scene! This reminds me of an opening to Yoshis Island, a whole bunch yoshers in a peaceful forest clearing. I love this! 💜
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Cyndralis-Corner [2020-01-15 21:10:46 +0000 UTC]
Look at all the Yoshiii's!!!! That blue one is so dang cute eeee
Amazing work!!! <33
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Modeerfwon In reply to Cyndralis-Corner [2020-01-17 21:19:40 +0000 UTC]
I agree the blue one is acting adorable!
Thank you so much! ^^
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Alex13Art [2020-01-15 14:25:42 +0000 UTC]
Aaaaaahhhhh~! Look at all those Yoshis!
I wanna join in too~ 💕💖
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Modeerfwon In reply to Alex13Art [2020-01-17 21:21:04 +0000 UTC]
Maybe one day you will :3
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ccagamer [2020-01-15 14:20:32 +0000 UTC]
Aaaaa the wholesome squad~!
Extraordinarily wonderful job fella!! 💚
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Modeerfwon In reply to ccagamer [2020-01-17 21:21:34 +0000 UTC]
Thanks!
Yoshi squad will reign!
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DeviantYoshi1990 [2020-01-15 12:01:22 +0000 UTC]
That's a nice artwork you got there, keep it up!
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Char1ika1 [2020-01-15 06:02:44 +0000 UTC]
2 of my friends love yoshies x3
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Char1ika1 In reply to Modeerfwon [2020-01-26 18:15:56 +0000 UTC]
I would have replied something differently before the drawing last night : P but im sure you saw the Yoshi stuff that they drew last night, told you they liked Yoshi too.
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