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MocaJoe — Drawing Circles

Published: 2004-04-19 05:03:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 196; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 44
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Description Whispers of nothing,
They're coming through the walls.

I feel their finger tips at my back,
hands grasping,
missing,
scrapping.

A long belief in Karma,
Ends now.

If an entity of that calibur,
Existed.
My toll should be up,
a time wasted.

A bill that will be surely paid,
Full price.
Take care of the body.
I'll be gone by dawn's kiss.

The cries,
of lies,
call for my demise.
Whispers draw me into their empty pools,
fingertips jabbing at my existence,
by this time tomorrow:

I'll be gone and forgotten.
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Comments: 15

lonefry [2005-06-08 06:31:06 +0000 UTC]

pretty dramatic we've the same icon. great work. what software did you used to create this?

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MocaJoe In reply to lonefry [2005-06-10 02:02:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. ^^ And.. my friend Dani made my icon for me. I haven't spoke with her in forever.. but theres nothing I can do about that.

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lonefry In reply to MocaJoe [2005-06-10 02:33:29 +0000 UTC]

no probem!!!

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Tree-Girl [2005-02-23 03:41:24 +0000 UTC]

Nice poem
It goes well with the picture, although you probably should give credit to the artist

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MocaJoe In reply to Tree-Girl [2005-02-23 21:53:52 +0000 UTC]

If you could tell me who it is, I'd be happy to give credit. The picture was saved into my files at least a year or so.

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Tree-Girl In reply to MocaJoe [2005-02-24 00:02:34 +0000 UTC]

No problem, its from:
[link]

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MocaJoe In reply to Tree-Girl [2005-02-24 00:42:32 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I'll give the picture credit now. -Nodnod.-

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LoveDustUterus [2005-01-17 01:49:39 +0000 UTC]

I can tell our style is pretty similar in some aspects. :3 One of the better depressing poems I've read.

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MocaJoe In reply to LoveDustUterus [2005-01-17 02:35:37 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thanks Anna. ^^

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LoveDustUterus In reply to MocaJoe [2005-01-17 02:38:30 +0000 UTC]

No problem, man.

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MocaJoe In reply to LoveDustUterus [2005-01-17 02:29:48 +0000 UTC]

I noticed that too when I read that poem of yours in class. But most of my poems usually vary, so I can't really say that. Like my last one... and if you think it's about Tiffani you need medication. >.>

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LoveDustUterus In reply to MocaJoe [2005-01-17 02:37:55 +0000 UTC]

I didn't think anything about Tiffani.

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MocaJoe [2004-04-21 05:10:08 +0000 UTC]

Nice. The first 3 numbers of this deviation is 666. >

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shilane [2004-04-19 20:37:59 +0000 UTC]

Oh... Depressing. It's good but depressing love. Nice choice in pictures btw. ~kishes~

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incdeveloper [2004-04-19 05:05:32 +0000 UTC]

impressive job, you get the shot of the move, good job

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