JMFAnimations8 [2016-01-05 23:44:07 +0000 UTC]
I like how you covered the back so it wouldn't be bare. If I may suggest, for the arms and legs, i would have used single connecter pieces to give the elbows and knees a wider range of articulation. And maybe took out the spikes on his feet. Other than that it's an awesome build over all. Good job bro. May your future mocs be always awesome.
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xNightStarxX [2015-04-10 14:34:29 +0000 UTC]
It look great but I see a few problems with it
-First the piece attached to the back chest piece doesn't seem to fit there since it just looks like there's a lump in his back
-Secondly there needs to be some solid red on the legs since the legs seem to be more red translucent than the rest of the body
-Also the legs seem weird since your using 3 leg pieces but its fine if that apart of your character's initial physiology
-Lastly the feet need to be the same metal type as the rest
The pluses for your MOC
-The shoulder pads fits perfectly with him and doesn't make him look like he has no neck
-And basically every thing else that I didn't say I liked
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Moc-Mixer In reply to xNightStarxX [2015-04-11 05:38:59 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much for your input i am working diligently to improve my mocs and you have helped a great deal. Thank you for taking your time to chck it out.
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