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Mo-Art-Please — Dementia ... Shhh

Published: 2008-05-26 04:41:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 1411; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 4
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Description "You...you killed them...all of them." Bulma gasped at the carnage splayed out in front of her. Blood dripped from the ceiling and soaked the cold white floor. Bodies were haphazardly strewn across the room, their heads bashed into walls or their limbs ripped apart. They hadn't stood a chance against the beast of a man that was holding her. She felt sick. She felt terrified.

Despite her attempt to push away, Vegeta clung onto her tighter, refusing to let her run from him in her fear. "Shhhh..."He hushed at her as he stroked her hair.

Bulma gave up struggling, too weak and nauseous from the sight and smell of the corpses, and opted to burying her head under Vegeta's chin and into his neck. She gripped his chest plate with white knuckles, afraid if she let go she would collapse onto the bloody tiles.

"You're a monster..." she choked on her sobs. How could he have done such a thing?

"Perhaps..." he whispered into her hair. "Perhaps."

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*Edit: Just incase you guys didn't know this is from my novel "Dementia".

It's a darker novel but has a good plot. I want people to still see the sinister side of Vegeta because in all truth he's a cruel bastard (but we can't help but love him for it ) and the selfishly-human Bulma (we all know she is truly spoilt but so am I ) who's weaknesses and desires for her own personal power and gain leads her into a pact, signed in blood, with the psychopathic Prince Vegeta to help him in Universal domination. But when she finds out that Earth, her family, and friends are in grave danger by her own accomplice can she break the bond that she has carelessly created with the dementedly psychotic Saiyan royalty or is she doomed to watch her self-indulgent decision destroy everything she loves?
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Comments: 30

smalsa [2013-05-21 20:56:28 +0000 UTC]

Did you ever post this? It just sounds like an incredibly dark story, I'm a sucker for those, they're rarely done! Crosses fingers that you got round to posting it!

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Mo-Art-Please In reply to smalsa [2013-05-24 02:28:38 +0000 UTC]

Unfortunately I never had the time to write the story. I have some random chapters written out from somewhere in the middle of the plot line but that was about it.

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ArrogantVengeance [2010-11-28 09:07:00 +0000 UTC]

Wow, this is such a touching picture, and the mini story in the artist's comments section almost made me cry...almost. I'm a little glad that this scene will be in your upcoming story "Dementia". It's not even released yet and I'm already a fan of it! It just sounds so amazing. Awesome picture, hopefully I will remember to look for it again when I'm reading this part of your story.

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Mo-Art-Please In reply to ArrogantVengeance [2010-11-30 03:32:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, I'll be sure to let you know when I post the story

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tpizgirl [2008-06-07 05:55:46 +0000 UTC]

where can i find this story?

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Mo-Art-Please In reply to tpizgirl [2008-07-05 17:25:58 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry, I don't have it posted on the internet. But I'll keep you all updated on my DA account

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PrinceVegetasLover [2008-05-31 03:52:13 +0000 UTC]

wow...amazing!!! i really hope you upload the fic, i really wanna read it!!! and the pic is awesome!!!

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Mo-Art-Please In reply to PrinceVegetasLover [2008-05-31 14:40:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks I'm glad you like the drawing

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PrinceVegetasLover In reply to Mo-Art-Please [2008-05-31 18:28:19 +0000 UTC]

no problem!

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veggiegirls222 [2008-05-27 05:00:19 +0000 UTC]

oh my goodness......
This is awesome!! I cant wait to see more!
haha I\'m spoiled too

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Mo-Art-Please In reply to veggiegirls222 [2008-05-27 17:11:56 +0000 UTC]

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StarbearerTM [2008-05-26 19:51:11 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful work. You should definately write more.

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Mo-Art-Please In reply to StarbearerTM [2008-05-27 00:40:58 +0000 UTC]

Hahah yeah thanks. I think I'm might scrap that last novel idea that I sent you...I just don't know where to go with it I think I'll just try to find time and write Dementia or something.

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StarbearerTM In reply to Mo-Art-Please [2008-05-27 17:11:35 +0000 UTC]

Actually I LIKE that idea you sent me. I would focus on Dementia first, and then use this as a story idea in reserve.

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Mo-Art-Please In reply to StarbearerTM [2008-05-29 00:20:23 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I think I agree. I have more idea's with Dementia than with this other un-titled fic. If I get some chapters of Dementia written down you think you'd be interested in beta-ing?

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StarbearerTM In reply to Mo-Art-Please [2008-05-29 16:21:27 +0000 UTC]

Yes I would!

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sk8turgurl [2008-05-26 17:24:44 +0000 UTC]

WOW!!! Great pic and great story! Where are you posting it?? When are you posting it if hasn\'t been yet??

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Mo-Art-Please In reply to sk8turgurl [2008-05-27 00:42:18 +0000 UTC]

I haven't posted it and I'm not sure if I'll ever. But I'm glad you like it!

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sk8turgurl In reply to Mo-Art-Please [2008-05-27 22:11:36 +0000 UTC]

Like it! Love it! It reminds me of Lab Monkey by Temptation!

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Mo-Art-Please In reply to sk8turgurl [2008-05-29 00:18:14 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow thanks. I love her writing style and plots so it's a nice compliment to be compared to her

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SSJPrincess05 [2008-05-26 16:23:08 +0000 UTC]

yes. now i definitely have to read more!! or see, same diff XD

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Mo-Art-Please In reply to SSJPrincess05 [2008-05-27 00:43:17 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha

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Jannette92 [2008-05-26 10:22:44 +0000 UTC]

it's awesome!

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Mo-Art-Please In reply to Jannette92 [2008-05-27 00:43:54 +0000 UTC]

Thankies!

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Jannette92 In reply to Mo-Art-Please [2008-05-27 08:21:25 +0000 UTC]

no problem

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VeggieGirl15 [2008-05-26 10:05:49 +0000 UTC]

Wow, that story was just.. wow! Great pic to go along with it too. ^^

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Mo-Art-Please In reply to VeggieGirl15 [2008-05-27 00:45:04 +0000 UTC]

Thanks I'm glad you like my writing AND art.

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VeggieGirl15 In reply to Mo-Art-Please [2008-05-27 10:19:27 +0000 UTC]

lol No problem!

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MarvelousMark [2008-05-26 05:09:13 +0000 UTC]

Cool pic and cool story to go along!

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Mo-Art-Please In reply to MarvelousMark [2008-05-27 00:45:19 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a bunch!

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