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Saekira [2016-07-05 13:35:52 +0000 UTC]
He looks awesome! I like how you did the template and he seems like a really interesting character!
I think he doesn't resemble Sugino anymore so no worries~
Maybe my OC Tsukino and he can be friends? Only if you like of course (:
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Saekira In reply to MlleMae [2016-07-05 17:02:35 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome! His face looks totally fine! (I'm looking forward to see it though I also like his current hair style tbh~)
Yay! I will add him to Tsukino's friends then~ But she's in class 3-E, but I think that's ok?
You're welcome :3
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MlleMae In reply to Saekira [2016-07-05 17:08:45 +0000 UTC]
Mooooh glad you like it then^^
I'll add her too! But i think we will have to work on 'how can they be friends' since he's in the main building and Tsukino in the classe 3-E?
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Saekira In reply to MlleMae [2016-07-05 18:29:42 +0000 UTC]
Of course I do!
Alright~ Yes, I think so too. Tsukino was a student in the main building in the past (before she was sent to class 3-E because her grades became bad), so maybe they know each other from the past?
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MlleMae In reply to Saekira [2016-07-05 19:01:11 +0000 UTC]
Oh my god, this is THE perfect solution! You're a genius girl! xD
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Saekira In reply to MlleMae [2016-07-05 20:40:57 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much!~ I'm glad you like the idea :3
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AzureDragoonGX In reply to Saekira [2016-07-06 00:57:06 +0000 UTC]
Perhaps I can help a bit there too, if it is welcomed and appreciated. ^^
Tsukino, being from Class B, most likely wouldn't see Kaito, a Class D student, very often, despite being in the main building. Their clubs also differ, so there's rare chances that they hang out after school too much. So, that leaves two things that override that.
1) Tsukino and Kaito have met during lunch and kept at it until the former drifted down to E.
2) On one fateful day, Tsukino decided to skip out of class, Kaito came to school late, they both met in the halls, and had a conversation that clarified their resonating behaviors (that being that they both like to slack off for one reason or another in Kunugigaoka) xD
Of course, what happens after Tsukino's class change becomes the main focus. So before I offer a path to take, let me ask you these two questions: Will they still be friends after "the end," and will they still REALLY be friends after "the end?" Pay close attention to both questions.
(As you can see, I like to challenge fellow writers)
- Azure
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MlleMae In reply to AzureDragoonGX [2016-07-09 19:13:24 +0000 UTC]
Omg, sorry I didn't had the notification of your comment! Thank you for your help! You do things so perfectly (I mean you watch over every little details, making it match perfectly the anime)! That's awesome you're so creative thank you ^^
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Saekira In reply to AzureDragoonGX [2016-07-07 10:15:40 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for the help! I think both points make sense though I like the second one a bit more c:
Tsukino often skips maths lessons so it would be possible that she'd meet Kaito in the school halls (if he arrives late).
I will wait until I know what MlleMae prefers and then decide how they met.
It's totally fine! I think that's actually pretty interesting (if they are still friends after "the end" or not).
From Tsukino's side a friendship is still possible because she cares a lot about her friends, but it won't be easy of course.
I think it would be a bit troublesome, but not impossible.
Thanks once again!
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MlleMae In reply to Saekira [2016-07-09 19:17:03 +0000 UTC]
You're reading my thought or what?
When I read AzureDragoonGX 's second option I was like "THIS IS IT!" It's just perfect!
I would say that if both oc can create a 'strong' friendship before 'the end' they could remain friend after ^^
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Saekira In reply to MlleMae [2016-07-11 13:55:58 +0000 UTC]
Alright! I will send you a note then if that's okay? c:
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MlleMae In reply to Saekira [2016-07-11 17:43:11 +0000 UTC]
Yeah! Thank you :3
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Saekira In reply to MlleMae [2016-07-11 18:00:45 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome!~
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AzureDragoonGX In reply to MlleMae [2016-07-04 18:18:20 +0000 UTC]
Heh, that's alright.
Good starting biography for Kaito. We can easily tell from his personality and skillset that he wouldn't shine on the battlefield the same way AssClass would. That being said, it would also be nice to see how he reacts to the main characters.
Speaking of relationships, in truth there are not too many known students in the main facility, but there are at least a few students that are notable, that Kaito could be interacting with. The two Class-D students that keep bullying Nagisa are some, as well as the Class-A Asano (the headmaster's son).
Ahhh You really need to finish the manga so that you can see where Kaito will really fit in, and since he's main school, obviously he's not too keen on 3-E, and he will try to consort with the rest of the school to defeat them (though of course he won't [fully] succeed.). xD
The rest are rather nitpicks. 16 years old is quite high for a junior-high school student. Though ages were never confirmed for all of them throughout the manga, 3-E was in between the ages of 14 and 15. To put into perspective here, I was in 2nd (of 4) years of high school by age 16. xD
It is certainly natural that Kaito is a psych buff, essentially living with it from day one. However, it isn't particularly stated why exactly Kaito prefers to use his persuasion ability to cause ill will. Sure, being forced to go somewhere you don't want to go can be infuriating, but that doesn't sound like the last straw to me. As far as I've seen, lawyer's kids (and I've known a decent bunch) are rather chill individuals that can't really stand chaos from provoking dialogue. That doesn't mean Kaito wouldn't be, but I think maybe just another part of his story that tells why he's like that will make it look right.
Also, Headmaster Asano is definitely not shaken at all by two lawyers. A 90+% acceptance rate would surely outweigh Kaito's parents' boycott. But him being in class 3-D is fine; it's all a part of his master plan. xD There's a reason why Asano is the image boy of Superpower Wiki's "Persuasion" page.
- Azure
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MlleMae In reply to AzureDragoonGX [2016-07-05 14:27:04 +0000 UTC]
Oh. My. God.
Thank you so much! Your help is soooo appreciated right now!
(For the age ... omg you save meh 'cause I don't know anything about grades in other countries e_e)
I'm going to search for more story to add to his description, and change the thing with Asano, I think the secret's of 3-E is big enough to be the reason why he wasn't sent to class 3-E ^^
AGAIN THANK YOU SO MUCH DEAR (:
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