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Published: 2013-10-25 00:40:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 19257; Favourites: 560; Downloads: 531
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Wait for it .... .Β Yah. A lot better then the original with some small changes. You know you guys wanted this, thanks for being patient
.Here's the original---> miokomata.deviantart.com/art/Gβ¦
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When I say you're tasting rainbow tonight you're gonna taste it.
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You draw some very pretty Flutterdash.Β Better watch you now.Β :9
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and then they...cuddled and went to sleep.
Β Really?
Hell no, they totally fucked!
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OH GOD! XDDD I'm dying
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Incredible improvement! Just a little confused why RD isnt that blue :/ but still awesome!
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Wow! You really improved and I liked your stuff before so congrats!
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Hahahh! Poor Fluttershy! She looks traumatized! 
This is very well drawn! Great job!
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"I'll show you exactly where rainbows come from."Β
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This works. I love the changes you've made, namely with Rainbow's focus being on Fluttershy rather than looking back at the audience.Β
Unlike the previous version which could could be considered a simple cute scene, this is definitely a sold ship. A damn good one at that.
Do you mind if I review this for my fanart blog? I assure you, I never steal credit, I merely feature and examine fanart I find.Β
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"If your going to to challenge me to a race.Β You really should try to win."Β RD holds Flutters against the cloud bank as stares down at her.
"I... I don't remember cha...lenging......Β Β *eeep*!"Β Flutters looks away from RD's longing gaze.
"Oh yes you did, see."Β RD grabs Flutters hoof and places it on her chest.Β Causing Flutters to glow bright.Β "You challenge my heart to race.Β Can't you feel how it races for you?"
"O..ooh... my!"Β Flutters face grows brighter as she feels the fast and heavy pounding of RD's heart so close to her.Β *EEEP*Β Flutters lets out a little squee as RD lowers down.Β Her warm gentle breath beats upon her face as she inches closer towards her.
"Since I caught you.Β I think my heart deserves...."Β RD gets as close as possible with out making contact.Β Flutters can feel every word that flows from her soft lips.Β ".... a reward."
Flutters closes her eye as she leans her head back slightly.Β "o... Ok!" she whispers in a slight airy voice excepting her fate.Β
And then RD goes in.... goes in...... "Rainbow Dash!Β This is the moment you kiss Fluttershy."Β Out from behind the cloud flies Twilight holding a script and a megaphone.Β
RD lets go of Flutters and helps her up as she looks at Twi.Β "Oh come on Twi.Β I think we humored you enough."
"Awww come on Dash.Β You two are perfect for the parts in my new romance play I been working on.Β I call it, 'Flutterby and Dashing Mane!Β A forbidden romance!"Β Twi stares out into nowhere with a dreaming look on her face.
"Seriously Twi.Β Those name are eerily similar to ours.Β This had better not be another one of your silly fan fics."Β RD starts to hover towards her trying to look at the script that Twi now holds close.
"Awww.... ya!Β Your right.Β The names need to be worked on.Β Tell you what.Β You two take a brake and I will get back to you in a day or two with the revisions."Β Twi quickly turns and flies away.Β Feeling the danger of being caught.
Dash laughs as she watches Twi get out of view only to stop as she feels two gentle hooves wrap around her waste.Β "F...Flutters!Β Not here.Β She might come back."Β RD's face blushes a bright pink and red as Flutters mane falls over her shoulder.Β She can feel Flutters breath on her neck as it travels up to her ear.
"Maybe we should let her see."Β Flutters whispers with a slight giggle.Β "After all it was one of her silly little fan fics lead me to you."Β She nibbles RD's ear causing her to shake slightly.Β
RD frees herself from Flutters grip as she nervously backs away.Β "Ahhh!Β I think I left something on in my house.Β BYE!"Β RD speeds off like a bolt to try and escape Flutters pressure.
"Hee Hee!Β Who's chasing who now?"Β Flutters giggles and she sets off after RD.Β Knowing she won't have to fly long before she finally catches her prize.
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Why you keep making picture so good they make me write stuff?Β I don't need to be writing trashy romance fan fic of RD and FS.Β That's Twi's job.Β
Yet again you create something that totally sends my mind into overdrive and is a feast for the eyes.Β It is wonderful revamp from your original that shows how good your art is.
Thank you for sharing this and all your works.Β It was nice to see this and then click on links to past stuff that has inspired me.Β
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How long did it take to write this? Appreciate the pos. feedback.
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Hmmm.Β I think about 10minutes to write it after the idea was created.Β Then 2 re-reads to try and catch any mistakes.Β Even then I at times find mistakes after I have posted.Β Though if you count the time creating the story.Β I would say a full 30-40minutes.Β I never write something until I have a story.Β It never works any other way for me.Β First I have the idea and let it float around in my head.Β Then I start telling myself the story making minor re-writes in my head.Β Then I type it out so that I don't have to do to much re-writing or thinking of what to say next.Β Some times they come out good.Β Some times not so.Β Though what I write is fully created in my head before it ever gets typed.Β
As for the feedback.Β You deserve it.Β Positive things should always be said when it comes to wonderful art that moves your imagination.Β Yours always seems to spark my creativity.
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Well im going to re-draw another picture from the past, hopefully you might get some ideas out of the next one.
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That's why your one of my favorites to watch.Β Your artwork is just so fun to view and often sparks a story in my mind.Β
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cant say its my favorite ship but..thats a good picture, love the detail!
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Assertiveness and brute force high powered friendship is the only way to get through the shyness that protects Fluttershy's heart!
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Look at those wingboners. Every marelester knows where this is going...
Also, Rainbow's tramp stamp is on backward, and a tad low on her flank.
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The cuter Fluttershy gets the more Dashie wants her.
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Woho
Yea... its suggestive. It also gives me story ideas... But I think its really well done and I can never say no to Flutterdash, especially when its form you.Β
Those wings are amazing! I also like the detail in the tails and manes, they look so lifelike, like I could easily run my fingers though them... And the cloud is just so puffy and nice. Why did you choose such a colour for it though?
Fluttershy and Dashie have such cute faces too. The looks they are giving each other there...
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Thanks you so much, i choose this color because it sets the mood with a sunset while the moon being out giving it a heavenly sky like feeling.
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