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RetroCityX [2014-07-28 19:17:48 +0000 UTC]
OPERATION 007 - THE RESCUE
-kicks door and says-
AGENT CLINTON : WANT REVENGE, STUPID DRAGON?!
dragon : HA! YOU CANT
KILL ME!
agent clinton: BUT I HAVE A RIFLE! AND THE SHOT GOES TO YOU!
-kills the dragon-
BANG!
Agent clinton: Lets get out! You almost got on danger!
Victim: uffs! You saved me!
When they arrived to the R mafia, they been safe forever...
Another victim saved from danger.
THE END
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RetroCityX In reply to RetroCityX [2014-07-30 14:04:53 +0000 UTC]
lol, i shouldn't have appeared on comic, huh?
was just to save the poor guy.
the dragon didn't knew what was doing, he was "headless", so i invaded and killed
the dragon, i saved the victim by a tris. and done.
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torokoprower [2006-07-02 21:44:38 +0000 UTC]
This should be getting good. I like it so far.
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hellwithin8024 [2006-07-02 04:09:23 +0000 UTC]
Can't wait to see the rest!
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BrownWolfFM [2006-07-02 03:54:53 +0000 UTC]
If there's a Barnes and Noble in Britan, then you might want to check out their art section. They have a good collection of art books that can help give you ideas for a multi-panel strip.
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BrownWolfFM In reply to BrownWolfFM [2006-07-02 07:02:51 +0000 UTC]
You might want to try amazon.com then.
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minnagowaseiryuu In reply to BrownWolfFM [2006-07-02 06:47:27 +0000 UTC]
Nope we don't have those. Comign to think of it, I don't think there is any nation chain of art shops, only independant stores which are far to sparce o.O
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Kid-Kobold [2006-06-30 22:34:43 +0000 UTC]
I'm sure she's not a member of the ADA. However nothing compliments a big belly like a nice smile, or vice-versa don't ya' think?
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Carephrii [2006-06-30 19:42:15 +0000 UTC]
*nods* Practice makes perfect! ^_^ This looks like it'll be fun! ^_^
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Blazethedragon [2006-06-30 14:42:45 +0000 UTC]
This is gonna be good!
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robomilk [2006-06-30 13:41:12 +0000 UTC]
what will happen next? who knooowwwwwsssss????
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HelixScape [2006-06-30 08:10:21 +0000 UTC]
Wow, this peice is quite literally bursting with colour! But it in no way detracts from the fun, comical happenings in the strip. You say you have some issues with multi-panel layouts? Well, from here it certainly doesn't look that way! You've made a good choice on how to layout this first scene - with the bulk of the page area taken up by the introductory frame (always a good way to start) which both establishes the scene you're setting, and allows us to see the principle character get their 'screen' time!
The detail in the first panel is wonderul. The hints of a leather texture on the chair (marked by the areas nearest the seams), the apparatus in the background, the detail in the clothing, and, of course, the stunning texture work you put into the character's fur and skin. They all really spruce up the first frame, and give the reader a real treat to start the series with!
The second frame was nicely pulled off - with the unexpected and humourous departure of one of the characters in the first panel. The way you've overlaid the 'Eep!' exclaimation over the two panels was a great idea - and really helps to break up the typical boxed and 'clinical' (forgive the pun!) nature of panel layouts. In the final panel, again we see some more great character work - you've done a wonderful job with the devious and cheeky expression, and the stretching glove was a nice idea too - it's little details like these that really spice up a normally straightforward action pose.
All in all, this is a fantastic start to the series, and i'm sure everyone can't wait to see where this heads! The quality of this image is absolutely stunning, and goes miles to showing off both your artistic, and your design skills in one. Keep up the great work Blue, I can't wait to see the next one!
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minnagowaseiryuu In reply to HelixScape [2006-07-01 20:26:32 +0000 UTC]
*hug* Heee, thanks for the hayooge comment *grins* I can never write out good big posts like that without seeming boring or repetitive >< But Writing isn't my forte n..n
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eloeem In reply to eloeem [2006-06-30 07:46:27 +0000 UTC]
*good start (geze I hate typos X..x)
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RetroCityX In reply to eloeem [2014-07-30 14:10:00 +0000 UTC]
NO! dont go please.Β Β Β
NOOOOOOOOO!!! DONT GOO!
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Megamechaman [2006-06-30 01:32:17 +0000 UTC]
ooh, is she gonna use helium or laughing gas?
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MacSilverD [2006-06-30 01:29:38 +0000 UTC]
lol I can't wait to see whats she's gonna do to him XD
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Dragonbreeder [2006-06-30 00:29:55 +0000 UTC]
wow i can't wait to see how this goes!
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Mishioshu [2006-06-29 23:05:02 +0000 UTC]
W00T CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS ^__^
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Sdwaggy [2006-06-29 22:36:06 +0000 UTC]
Dentists are expensive, hope he gets his money worth of that knock out gas. (Whatβs the name I'm thinking?)
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Tombfyre [2006-06-29 22:34:34 +0000 UTC]
Ahh, she's at it again eh? ^^ Might make for more interesting dentist trip.
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ToferTheAkita [2006-06-29 22:27:15 +0000 UTC]
This should be interesting!
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wolfcub [2006-06-29 22:22:14 +0000 UTC]
oh no trouble
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