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minimew — A Tearful Goodbye

Published: 2008-05-13 01:09:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 4673; Favourites: 85; Downloads: 26
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Description After beating Mystery Dungeon Explorers of Time, I had to draw this

(the following may be different from the games original text, but Hinote and Kusabana are my characters anyways)


They'd done it, they'd defeated Dialga and brought him back to his sences, there by correcting time and preventing the World's Peralysis. Hinote, the Charmander, and Kusabana, the Chikorita were leaving Temporal Tower and heading back to the Rainbow Stone ship to get back to Lapras so they could go home....

"Tremors!" Kusabana anounced as the the stone walkway began to shake. After bracing themselves, the shaking stoped and the two started walking again. (Ug..I feel so tired...so heavy...is it from fighting with Dialga?) Hinote thought to herself as they walked. No more than five steps after thinking this did she begin to glow, pale orbs of light rising and dissapering around her body. (This..this light!!!.......Ok...I guess my time with Kusabana is finnaly over...) She thought sadly to herself as tears began to prick around her eyes. "Hey Hinote what's wrong?" Kusabana called as she came running back to Hinote, having noticed that she stoped. "W-What's going on Hinote, what are all thoese lights?" Hinote looked up to Kusabana with such a sad look on her face. "Kusabana, I'm afraid...I'm afraid to say we have to say goodbye now." Kusabana reeled for a moment, hearing such words from her friend. "Wh-Whats do you mean goodbye?! Why?!" "I'm sorry I didn't tell you sooner...but when we ran into Dusknoir that finnal time...when Groovile dissapered with him back to the futur...he told us if we stoped the planets peralysis, then all the pokemon from the futur would dissaper, that means I'm dissapering too." Kusabana took a few steps closer, tears filling up in her eyes and spilling down to her cheeks. "But..you cna't dissapere, I only got this far....because you were by my side!! I was only able to be this strong because you gave me courage! If you left..I..I don't know what I'd do!" Hinote took a deep breath and smiled, it was a sad smile, but a smile none the less. "No Kusabana, you have to be strong on your own now, you have to live! You need to make it back home to tell everyone what happened here so that this kind of thing never happens again." Kusabana sniffled, taking another step forward. "Hinote..." Hinote smiled a little warmer, closing her eyes. "I'm really glad that we got to train together at the guild, that we were able to start our own exploration team." She said, opening her own tear filled eyes. "But even more, I'm glad I got to know you Kusabana, I'm glad we got to become best friends." She said, resting her paw on Kusabana's shoulder. "Wait Hinote!" Kusabana said, lifting one of her front legs up. "I'm sorry...I'm so lucky to have had you for a friend." "Hinote I feel the same way! Your my dearest friend! Your more important that anything!" "Kusabana, even after I dissapere from this world.. I'll always be with you, so please don't be sad." She said, reaching out to hug her friend as thightly as she could even as she started to fade, then finaly, dissapered. "Hinote.......HINOTE!!!!" Poor little Kusabana cried, her tears falling on the stone path where her friend once stood.

In saving the world from darkness and a futur of suffering, the brave little Charmander, Hinote, had given up her own futur, her own life. Now, the heart broken Chikorita, Kusabana, trudged down the rocky stone path until finnaly she reached the Rainbow Stone ship. "There it is!" She said, stumbling over to it, climbing abord as it rumbled and started to pull away from the stone path that led to Temporal Tower. "I'm....I'm getting father away from the tower.....father away from Hinote..." She said wit hantoher sinffle. "Hinote..." Chikorita made it back to Lapras and made the long journey back home. She told everyone she could about her story, about Hinote's story, wanting to grant her friend's last wish...
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Comments: 39

Endivie11 [2017-04-10 16:06:48 +0000 UTC]

That scene was so sad but I actually started to cry at the beach part. That was intense...

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AWSOMEGIRLZ998 [2015-04-17 23:01:39 +0000 UTC]

I love this game but I break down into tears at the ending!

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johannchristopherg9 [2012-12-08 13:35:24 +0000 UTC]

It this what happens to the characters at the ending?

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Browntown747 [2012-09-02 04:49:33 +0000 UTC]

snivy snivy snivy [Great now whenever i see something like this I think of Iphelcles Fading in front of His Big Brother [He does in Glory of Heracles when he remembers that he is already died once before [He literally in the game starts to glows and balls of light comes out of his body while he litally fades out of existance

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Polarisey123 [2011-10-11 22:46:49 +0000 UTC]

aww! poor chikorita...i remember when i had to part w/ Euglena...i actually cried, i easily get emotional over storyline tragedies like this one

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RedClover17 [2011-03-31 20:41:25 +0000 UTC]

was a charmander too and had the same partner. her name was Blossom while I was flara. it made me cry so much. but Im glad they bring you back! CX

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uberfrill14 [2010-07-17 01:37:43 +0000 UTC]

I've made it to that part. I actually was about to cry when I saw it.

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PoromPikachu [2010-05-09 02:51:40 +0000 UTC]

Hey! I was also a Charmander and my partner a Chikorita!

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leafbarrett [2010-04-27 23:12:40 +0000 UTC]

Anyone who says they didn't at least feel sad at this point of the game is a dirty liar. Hell, just thinking about this part of the game still makes me sad.

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Nyxferno [2010-01-02 02:41:21 +0000 UTC]

May I use this in a PMD tribute video I'm making? I'll give you credit for your artwork of course^^ But I wanted to ask permission before I use it^^
this makes me tear up lol

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Guilrel [2009-12-04 06:59:58 +0000 UTC]

That happened to me when I was a Charmander (which turned out to be great, that I had a personality of one the entire time and I didn't even had to take the quiz the second time) but I'm really a guy and I also had Chikorita who's also a girl. For some reason I think it would've been more heartwarming between me and Chikorita if she was crushing on me the entire time, weird huh?

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leafbarrett In reply to Guilrel [2010-04-27 23:11:13 +0000 UTC]

Who says she wasn't? You can decide that for yourself.

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Guilrel In reply to leafbarrett [2010-05-06 16:39:40 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for mind screwing me.

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leafbarrett In reply to Guilrel [2010-05-06 18:57:41 +0000 UTC]

O.o? How is that a mindscrew?

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Guilrel In reply to leafbarrett [2010-06-04 20:29:45 +0000 UTC]

I don't know.

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Mogomojo224 [2009-11-26 20:12:11 +0000 UTC]

im a Charmander too
but my partner was a Turtwig
too bad i cant get back to the temporal tower since i had to go back and am stuck at the beginning of the Hidden Land

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KararaFromKeron [2009-11-04 01:21:14 +0000 UTC]

The ending makes me cry every time...

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Animallover727 [2009-07-09 16:22:59 +0000 UTC]

I beat the Game as well, But I was a Torchic with a Piplup... I started again as a Skitty... Yay Skitty! I completed Darkness, Started Time..

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Kendell2 [2009-04-21 02:27:57 +0000 UTC]

Why is it always a Chikorita? I ask because my partner was one! I felt so sorry for her! I like the full ending though.

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williamcll [2009-03-22 14:16:53 +0000 UTC]

the player should bring some human items like
1.tv
2.death star
3.your mama
4.gundam
5.hacking device
6.plasma rifle

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MagmaDP [2009-01-09 23:13:03 +0000 UTC]

YAAAAY
SPOILERS! XD
I'm at Diagla [or however you spell his name] but I'm on a losing streak. So I didn't read what happens.

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poke-xiaolin-globox [2008-12-02 13:45:26 +0000 UTC]

you ilove that game i hated when we have to dissapear oh that bit sooo sad by the way i was treeko and my partner was cyndaquil

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ElizabethElric [2008-10-01 00:14:40 +0000 UTC]

I remember this...I felt bad for Cyndaquil at the end. He was an awesome partner. That's an awesome game. I was a Treeco.

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XxBlackpantherxX [2008-07-26 05:28:19 +0000 UTC]

made me cry.

I got the game and i keep dieing w/ Dialga..now i dun wanna finish the game ><

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Koyolein [2008-07-15 12:54:02 +0000 UTC]

i cried at this time..

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Xidphel [2008-07-05 03:12:13 +0000 UTC]

Fortunately, Dialga eats plot holes for breakfast.

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elizabysmal [2008-07-02 19:55:29 +0000 UTC]

Seriously, best game EVAH.

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Olyva [2008-06-09 21:09:12 +0000 UTC]

I loved the ending... It made me so sad.

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Xidphel [2008-06-01 06:25:24 +0000 UTC]

...Err, I remember a different ending:
Grovyle has already returned to the past before entering temporal tower and the shaking on the stone path never happened.

Different note than the different ending: Delphi (Mudkip, partner) tumbled down the stairs after placing the five time gears XD
Best part of the ending.
Also, Primal Dialga is badass.

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poke-xiaolin-globox [2008-05-26 21:25:10 +0000 UTC]

awwwwww poor chikarita i have this game its the best

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TheGoldCrow [2008-05-24 18:33:20 +0000 UTC]

Hey I got the same combo, Charmander and Chikorita. Anyways I felt like a dork cause my eyes watered during the ending... and i'm a guy!

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SupaShana [2008-05-20 01:11:38 +0000 UTC]

At least Dialga used his powers of time to revive the player...

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XThunder [2008-05-15 19:55:46 +0000 UTC]

I WAS SAD AT THE END AS WELL

holy crap...IT ACTUALLY MADE ME SAD D:

and then it got really cheesey when you just...uhhh

no...not gonna spoil that

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minimew In reply to XThunder [2008-05-16 00:07:38 +0000 UTC]

XD I KNOW!!


but on another note

SEETHREW CHARMANDER!!!!! HOMG

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XThunder In reply to minimew [2008-05-16 00:16:24 +0000 UTC]

INVISIBLE CHARMANDING

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Latios765 In reply to XThunder [2008-05-24 19:46:16 +0000 UTC]

Wait...you mean it going to be the same as Pokemon Mystery Dungeon Blue/Red Rescue Team?

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XThunder In reply to Latios765 [2008-05-25 04:06:41 +0000 UTC]

Why? what happened in that one?

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Latios765 In reply to XThunder [2008-05-25 21:11:20 +0000 UTC]

To cut the long story short, player beat Big Boss, player got revise, player save world, player leave world, player's side-kick got upset, player wish to return, player return to world, the two united and a hell lot more rescue mission to do, including more legendary

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AwesomeDragonDude [2008-05-13 04:39:10 +0000 UTC]

Makes me all teary but that's a good thing.

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