Kara-Yami [2018-04-27 22:03:32 +0000 UTC]
I'm sure glad you mentioned the line art issue so that I know not to mention it here(even though I guess I just did?^-^) This is WAY cool. I love his design! He is very interesting! I really like all your colors and think that it was all used very effectively. I dont know your last coloring style, so I dont know what to compare it to. but it did pay off! The clothes are very nice! I like the equal and needed hard and soft lines. Its not over or under used! I will mention the hand is a little awkward, although I understand. Hands are the freaking worse! The only other thing I would suggest is going a little darker on the shadow under his feet. The overall shadow is good, but it still looks like he's floating a little. Just needs a little more grounding is all. Overall, you did Awesome! I hope that bug gets fixed soon! But just so you know, I can hardly tell anything is off, I had to look very closely! Great job!
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mingapur In reply to Kara-Yami [2018-05-01 15:42:29 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the quick reply and I will keep your critique in mind. Sadly I havent fixed the bug yet although I already did some research. But as you said it isn't that obvious so I will just continue ignoring it for now.
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