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MilkyBerry — The Bad Stories Monster

Published: 2011-09-30 10:45:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 719; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 16
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Description The Bad Stories Monster

Elle se nourrit des histoires froissées, celles que l’on jette comme des boules de papier. Puis ses yeux pleurent de l’encre pour mieux les oublier…

She feed on crumpled stories, the one we throw up like old paper balls. Then her eyes are crying ink to better forget them...


(Please don't hesitate to give your critiques to help me improve myself next times ! Thank you !)

(Firt version looked like this . I do not know which one I prefer so if you have any advice...)
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Comments: 7

ojikuroi [2011-10-04 06:53:59 +0000 UTC]

CREEPY >.<

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MilkyBerry In reply to ojikuroi [2011-10-04 15:36:08 +0000 UTC]

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Synystervida [2011-09-30 11:45:27 +0000 UTC]

Etrange, mais j'aime beaucoup!

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MilkyBerry In reply to Synystervida [2011-09-30 17:19:39 +0000 UTC]

Merci ! J'avais envie de faire un truc bizarre

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Synystervida In reply to MilkyBerry [2011-09-30 20:23:50 +0000 UTC]

De rien! C'est réussi en tout cas!

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MilkyBerry In reply to Synystervida [2011-10-01 17:12:01 +0000 UTC]

Merci beaucoup, ravie qui ça plaise

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Synystervida In reply to MilkyBerry [2011-10-01 20:16:03 +0000 UTC]

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