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MikkiMarie — Depression is an Option
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Published: 2015-09-14 16:49:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 60644; Favourites: 1535; Downloads: 0
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Description Depression is a choice, my dear,
And happiness the same
You choose this illness, don’t you?
What a tragic little game.

Depression is an option, love
Just get up out of bed
Take your tears and worries
And just smile now instead.

Depression is a choice, you see,
And so is suicide.
Just sit back, kick your feet up, dear
Enjoy this perfect ride.

Get over your own standards
Of what everyone should be.
Just smile for once, and maybe
You’ll be living perfectly.

...

But...

Depression is an illness
That we feel so deep within.
Why would anybody choose
To write poetry on their skin?

Unless there lies a reason, dear,
I would not choose to die.

If depression was an option...
Well...
I’d choose to say goodbye.
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Serendipitylove3 [2020-08-16 20:37:56 +0000 UTC]

So good !!!🌸

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OriginalDarkPoetry [2020-08-06 18:21:28 +0000 UTC]

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CaikSlyce [2020-02-19 21:38:56 +0000 UTC]

Got me in the first half ngl

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silentflood [2018-02-09 12:47:11 +0000 UTC]

I was going to get really mad at first. But then I kept reading haha.

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joylesswolfdevilgirl In reply to silentflood [2018-11-12 03:47:35 +0000 UTC]

lol me too

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mickeythebest [2017-12-14 12:58:25 +0000 UTC]

It's really great, the poem, not depression

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arborvitae-Arienne [2017-04-27 11:26:04 +0000 UTC]

love this

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Tsvanni [2016-06-22 14:16:52 +0000 UTC]

Depression is a medical condition caused by an imbalance of dopamine, seratonin, or similar chemicals in the brain, very often linked to the thyroid process.

Very often it is not a choice. People saying things like this is why it continues to be one of the most underdiagnosed and undertreated mental illnesses, and why people who struggle with the condition are afraid to seek help. But sure.

Let's call it a choice.

It's hard when the point of view of the first guy is so often what people act like. Good poem.

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Jazzy-Vertex [2016-02-11 04:03:27 +0000 UTC]

I do hope people would understand that someday instead of using it as an excuse for getting attention...
Life is not easy when we got suicidal thoughts...
We do not choose it...
We do not choose to die...
we only choose to end the horrible pain...
and only death can let be free from it...

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PLAINROADS [2015-12-12 01:10:57 +0000 UTC]

Hey would you mind if I turned this into rap? All credit will go to you of course

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MikkiMarie In reply to PLAINROADS [2015-12-12 15:26:51 +0000 UTC]

Of course! Send me a link when it's finished!

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GlowingLanterns [2015-10-22 11:48:09 +0000 UTC]

I love how you wrote the poem but depression is it a choice. I know I don't want to die, but the scary thing is that I wouldn't know I killed my self because I couldn't control it. And I would never know I did it, because hi would be dead.
And my emotions change all the time almost instantly. It is a chemical imbalance.

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PrivateCocky In reply to GlowingLanterns [2015-11-03 15:23:16 +0000 UTC]

They aren't saying it's a choice. The poem is from the point of view of someone who doesn't understand depression, apart from the last part in italics, which is from the point of view of the depressed person.

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joy97 [2015-10-21 10:53:07 +0000 UTC]

"Unless there lies a reason, dear,
I would not choose to die.

If depression was an option...
Well...
I’d choose to say goodbye."

So true...

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0-Crtl-Alt-Del-0 [2015-10-17 13:49:44 +0000 UTC]

Just beautiful. Although I must admit, when I saw the first line, I may have come here for the express purpose of telling you off Luckily I read the rest of the lovely poem before I did, and realized what you were doing. Wonderful job!

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FougereMarchant In reply to 0-Crtl-Alt-Del-0 [2017-04-12 23:26:13 +0000 UTC]

@ 0-Ctrl-Alt-Del-0: that was my reaction as well, but quickly realized as I read the rest that the poem actually aimed at correcting that misconception.

Thanks MikkiMarie too!

Fougère

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Lyrica-Lee [2015-10-15 20:02:36 +0000 UTC]

This is perfection... so many people don't understand what it's like

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Sofiik [2015-10-14 23:30:19 +0000 UTC]

If depression is an illness, it is a mental illness, and those who harm themselves should not be trusted around other people.

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Yi-Phan In reply to Sofiik [2015-11-18 04:09:37 +0000 UTC]

Should not be trusted around other people? Maybe you don't understand what depression is about, and why people hurt themselves, while in a depressive state. It's not about bringing abuse to someone else, but to ourselves. Yes, I placed myself there, since I suffer from it as well. But, I've never... never wanted to hurt someone else around me. That's not what this "mental illness" is about. Don't classify it with the likes of being "psychotic" or anything, that might cause someone to try to bring pain onto others. It's not. If anything, people being around us, it can help. 

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Kat-Deane In reply to Sofiik [2015-10-16 12:14:57 +0000 UTC]

Why shouldn't people who are trying to get rid of their own pain be trusted around other people? a lot of the time self harm occurs because it helps lift the depression. Actually, it would be the endorphins that get released that help lift the depression.

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TamMebonia [2015-10-14 18:36:16 +0000 UTC]

The thing is, the two sides mean different things by word "depression". I think the biggest problem in this matter is just that, in everyday language the word "depression" has become a term not only for mental illness, but also a term for a certain mood for reasons like boredom, troubles, bad things happening etc., and an average person doesn't differentiate. I've experienced them both, and that's how I know the difference, or I might not have known either.

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