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mendystar1 — It hurts.
Published: 2012-01-14 02:39:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 317; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 6
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Description I have never fell in love,
but I imagine it would be like.

How would it feel to hold hands
with the person I liked?
How would it feel to have them having their hands in your hair,
as they smiled?
My heart starts to race.
I've never been in love.

When I listen to music,
I imagine what it would be like.

I imagine a stage.
The singer singing the lyrics they've wrote
with so much passion,
it makes your heart ache.
And I thought to myself
This is what love must feel like

A painful kind of hurt.
A hurt that leaves you breathless.
That left you seeing stars.
A hurt that left you crying
when you're left awake at night.
A hurt that yearned for them,
even when they're not there.
And then you're hit with the painful reality,
that it'll never happen.
it'll never come true.
and that's when you feel dead inside.

I've never been in love,
but I imagined what it would be like.

And it hurts..
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Comments: 10

Anonymous687 [2012-01-14 03:14:51 +0000 UTC]

You're a natural. This piece is brilliant and amazing in every single way. I love how it tells the truth, but never keep looking for love. It's out there, somewhere, somehow.

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mendystar1 In reply to Anonymous687 [2012-01-14 03:27:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much.
I wanted my pieces to tell the truth, because they are.
I want people to relate to them. To tell me stories.
That's why I write it the instant I think it and I upload it right away without editing.
Yes. Someday, somewhere.. we'll all find love.

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Scarletphoenixtears [2012-01-14 02:41:56 +0000 UTC]

You captured the feeling perfectly!

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mendystar1 In reply to Scarletphoenixtears [2012-01-14 02:47:35 +0000 UTC]

Really? I wrote this on the spot. xP

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Scarletphoenixtears In reply to mendystar1 [2012-01-14 02:53:11 +0000 UTC]

It's amazing how accurate you are. It's exactly how I feel.

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mendystar1 In reply to Scarletphoenixtears [2012-01-14 03:02:24 +0000 UTC]

I was scared I wasn't accurate. It's been a while since I've had that feeling. I should have wrote it down.
When you fell in love or when you listen to music?

And thanks for watching and for the favorite.

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Scarletphoenixtears In reply to mendystar1 [2012-01-14 03:11:48 +0000 UTC]

A little of both I think but more so when I fell in love. You're welcome for the watch and the fave

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mendystar1 In reply to Scarletphoenixtears [2012-01-14 03:35:45 +0000 UTC]

That's nice. I've never been in love so I don't really know what it's like, well, that's what I tell myself.
Not the true feelings of love anyways.

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Scarletphoenixtears In reply to mendystar1 [2012-01-14 03:48:19 +0000 UTC]

You'll know one day.

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mendystar1 In reply to Scarletphoenixtears [2012-01-15 03:42:40 +0000 UTC]

Yeah.

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