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Published: 2010-06-04 21:50:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 832; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 0
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Description I havent been able to log onto my laptop and so i couldnt submmit this. I actually finished this 2 days after i submited the lines for this.
Its more practice so i chucked the backround.

comment please?

Yoruichi (c) Tite Kubo
Art (c) melon-face00
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Comments: 4

Alantyn [2010-08-13 10:35:32 +0000 UTC]

It looks great! Especially the hair which is very nicely shaded.

Well, I just want to give some advices, if it's ok.

The skin is quite well-shaded, although she looks a little "pale". You could try shading with a more yellow/red (something between) color. Also try making light from two sides, 'for example' one light that is yellow (from the sun) and the other is blue, (from 'for example': water, when the sun shines on the water it reflects the blue color). Makes it look more complicated and awesome . Then it's the same with the clothes, skin, hair, those white things, scarf, eyes.

Now, when I took a closer look, the "scarf" looks a little off, flat maybe.
Anyway, as I said well done! I wish to see more :>

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Melon-Face00 In reply to Alantyn [2010-08-15 04:29:03 +0000 UTC]

lol i had to read tht lik 3 times before i really retained wut yuu said xD

But i totally understand now and ill try my best to incorporate your advice into my head, and into my painting..thingy lol.

I appreciate you giving me advice! ;D
Thank you!

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Alantyn In reply to Melon-Face00 [2010-08-15 07:53:46 +0000 UTC]

haha, I am sorry for being so hard to understand :]

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Melon-Face00 In reply to Alantyn [2010-08-15 18:27:32 +0000 UTC]

xD

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