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ProfessorParsec [2009-07-19 01:33:36 +0000 UTC]
The overall picture looks realistic and you did an amazing job on the shading. I have some construactive critisism for you. There is a little conflict in the picture. Her face seems a little wide for some reason and the shadows of her arm conflict with the shadows on the bracelet, making her arm look unproportionally short in comparison to her body. The black on her chest confuses me. Although you may have wanted to make it look bold, there really is no true black in most pictures, but greys, browns, and blues usually. I can't tell if it's a part of her clothing or a tatto, for it seems to go under the clothes at the bottom but overtop of the string at the top, but doesn't cast a shadow. As bold as black may be, I encourage you to dabble in using dark colors to show darkness instead of black (other than black and white pictures, for you'd be a bit hooped there). You may like what you find. The hair is well done and you seem to have a great grasp at how fabric and the body work together. Well done.
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ProfessorParsec In reply to megcowley [2009-07-23 01:23:28 +0000 UTC]
I give full critiques because that's what I want from others. Not saying "Now you scratch my back", but kindof a pass it on kindness thing. I find that if someone gives me constructive critisism, I know that they have actually taken the time to look at every part of the drawing. "LOL" and "Nice" say absolutely nothing, and do not help in the advancement of skill.
The whole true black thing I discovered in a fantasy world instruction book. The artist pointed out that in real life, things are rarely black but dark colours. Things look black to us, but if we were to take a picture of it and look close at the pixels in photoshop or something, we probably wouldn't find much (unless it was taken at night with no flash). I found it interesting, so I thought I'd pass it on. I'm glad I could help!
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FFecchifan [2009-07-02 11:46:21 +0000 UTC]
Good job.
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