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Published: 2014-05-15 17:29:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 3091; Favourites: 139; Downloads: 0
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Description She never slept well in the dark,
not without the children of the sun and moon
to guide her weary lids home.

Guided by the aftermath, she was always two steps behind.
What did the world look like to the girl who had been through it all?
Braved the heaviest of storms,
yet skipping over cracks in the pavement.

They said her eyes were the wisps of clouds before the storm.
To him they were reflections of pages overlooked.
She said it was like she lived the life of someone she had never met.
Laid out to dry, yesterdays news.
He knew her as the girl who was built to never collapse.

He wished he was too.

He loved her more than words could say, and yet her pain was such,
that at times, he feared she wouldn’t make it.
But on nights like these, even when it threatened to consume her,
he became convinced that somehow she would.
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Medoriko In reply to ??? [2016-03-11 06:36:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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saevuswinds [2014-08-12 23:52:14 +0000 UTC]

Congratulations on the DD.

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Medoriko In reply to saevuswinds [2014-08-15 03:47:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much <3

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saevuswinds In reply to Medoriko [2014-08-16 13:27:51 +0000 UTC]

No problem! You deserved it!

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Medoriko In reply to saevuswinds [2014-08-18 04:36:51 +0000 UTC]

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chart-the-sky [2014-08-12 00:21:44 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful and congrats on the Daily Deviation! I love the sense of hope he has in her strength through all odds.

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Medoriko In reply to chart-the-sky [2014-08-15 03:47:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you <3!!!

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artbyfieldsofsage [2014-08-03 00:17:30 +0000 UTC]

This is a powerful piece of writing! Β There is 1 line that grabbed me and just won't let go: "He knew her as the girl who was built to never collapse." Β Interesting that he feared for her, that she just might be consumed, that she wouldn't make it ... but he knew, he KNEW she would survive! Β My dear, so many women walk in her shoes. Β Congrats on the DD!

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Medoriko In reply to artbyfieldsofsage [2014-08-03 05:13:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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artbyfieldsofsage In reply to Medoriko [2014-08-05 02:11:02 +0000 UTC]

You are very welcomeΒ 

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Cleargold [2014-08-02 06:57:07 +0000 UTC]

I rather like this too. It has such a wistful feel, like something lost or not quite gained. Yet it's gentle and a little sad as well. A very thoughtful, and thought-provoking piece. Thank you for sharing it with all of us.

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Medoriko In reply to Cleargold [2014-08-02 15:53:19 +0000 UTC]

No problem

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hsherran [2014-07-26 01:51:18 +0000 UTC]

Lovely.

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Medoriko In reply to hsherran [2014-07-27 04:06:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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LeftUnfinished [2014-07-25 21:02:14 +0000 UTC]

Amazing.

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Medoriko In reply to LeftUnfinished [2014-07-26 00:48:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you~

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Chameleonist [2014-07-25 20:38:34 +0000 UTC]

Β  so amazing...

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Medoriko In reply to Chameleonist [2014-07-26 00:48:19 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you!

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Chameleonist In reply to Medoriko [2014-07-27 02:04:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank YOU, for posting... That was especially meaningful to me.

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Medoriko In reply to Chameleonist [2014-07-27 04:53:02 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad it had an impact on you. I think we can all relate, you know?

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Chameleonist In reply to Medoriko [2014-07-27 05:57:53 +0000 UTC]

Agreed.

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FxMbrothers [2014-07-25 20:30:48 +0000 UTC]

*w* so deep, so beautiful

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Medoriko In reply to FxMbrothers [2014-07-26 00:48:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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FxMbrothers In reply to Medoriko [2014-07-26 10:18:14 +0000 UTC]

No no, thank you for making it! *w*

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Medoriko In reply to FxMbrothers [2014-07-27 04:58:08 +0000 UTC]

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Edges-to-Everything [2014-07-25 20:08:58 +0000 UTC]

She said it was like she lived the life of someone she had never met.

Sentences like this one hook me, and I find myself turning them over in my mind all day.

Congratulations on the Daily Deviation!
- Michael
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Medoriko In reply to Edges-to-Everything [2014-07-25 20:27:18 +0000 UTC]

I'm so glad That is my favorite line, actually. I'm glad it had an impact on you. Thank you so much Mike <3

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chromeantennae [2014-07-25 20:08:38 +0000 UTC]

You deserve it and so much more, Nadia.

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Medoriko In reply to chromeantennae [2014-07-25 20:26:45 +0000 UTC]

Nah Thank you Ricky, it means a lot to have your support. Truly



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chromeantennae In reply to Medoriko [2014-07-25 20:29:00 +0000 UTC]

You do.

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Medoriko In reply to chromeantennae [2014-07-26 00:52:11 +0000 UTC]

Same to you bro. Always on top of our game. That's the way!

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chromeantennae In reply to Medoriko [2014-07-26 01:49:14 +0000 UTC]

WOO!

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Medoriko In reply to chromeantennae [2014-07-27 05:02:04 +0000 UTC]

We gotta catch up. Note me when you have spare time I miss talking to you.Β 

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chromeantennae In reply to Medoriko [2014-07-27 05:05:37 +0000 UTC]

Definitely.

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ellymango [2014-07-25 20:02:36 +0000 UTC]

Wah! Another one?! You're on a roll darlin', keep it up!Β 

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Medoriko In reply to ellymango [2014-07-25 20:26:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you darling <3

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ellymango In reply to Medoriko [2014-07-25 21:05:33 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome~!

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AgonizingSwordfish [2014-07-25 19:37:06 +0000 UTC]

Congratulations on the DD!

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Medoriko In reply to AgonizingSwordfish [2014-07-25 19:40:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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AgonizingSwordfish In reply to Medoriko [2014-07-26 17:41:18 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure

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captivityisevil [2014-07-25 19:30:48 +0000 UTC]

Flagged as Spam

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Medoriko In reply to captivityisevil [2014-07-25 19:32:17 +0000 UTC]

Appreciate that! Thanks

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princessanastasia434 [2014-07-25 19:24:08 +0000 UTC]

Flagged as Spam

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Medoriko In reply to princessanastasia434 [2014-07-25 19:32:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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hopeburnsblue [2014-07-25 18:43:08 +0000 UTC]

I've always loved this piece--glad it got a DD!

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Medoriko In reply to hopeburnsblue [2014-07-25 18:46:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you dear

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ArwynRie [2014-07-25 18:12:41 +0000 UTC]

Such moving work! Β Congrats on the DD! Β Good for you!

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Medoriko In reply to ArwynRie [2014-07-25 18:31:23 +0000 UTC]

Thank you !

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akrasiel [2014-07-25 16:54:54 +0000 UTC]

Congrats on the DD, this poem deserves it!

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Medoriko In reply to akrasiel [2014-07-25 17:02:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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