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McZipper — Let the Shadow Away
Published: 2009-08-06 05:30:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 1065; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 0
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Model : ~nocturnia27Photographer : McZipper
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Okay I am finally capable of giving useful feedback... I like the angle, and the pose because it's not something I see very often. I would like to see higher contrast however. For example, darker blacks conrast better with brighter whites. Maybe one, powerful light source could provide intense highlights, and blacker shadows, as long as it isn't too emphasized.
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I may have highlighted the whites a little more but I could hardly darken the blacks, I wanted to keep details of the dress. As for the whites, it would have burned the top of her head and a part of her face. I don't know about your screen tho, but on mine it looks perfectly balanced. (I tend to see everything a little darker tho, but I can't adjust it brighter).
Thank you for the feedback, I'm glad you like it !
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You're welcome. Are you using Photoshop?
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Excellent program. I used it when I was in school. A lot of my 2D work on here was made in Photoshop.
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I know of none that is more useful! Except maybe our own brains!
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J'adore la façon dont la lumière arrive de 3/4 pour repousser les ombres, mais jamais complètement. Et la robe noire qui se perd dans l'arrière-plan. Ajoute à ça le regard de ta magnifique modèle... 
(Je crois que le titre correct aurait plutôt été "let the shadow away" ou même "let the shadow get away" mais ta version sonne définitivement mieux... quoique je suis un disciple des titres en français, j'aurais bien vu une traduction du genre "laissons les ombres au loin")
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Merci beaucoup, ça fait plaisir à lire! 
Je crois que je vais changer le titre n'empêche, quand je vois un titre en français mal traduit ça me titille donc je vais tout de même pas faire de même avec l'anglais! 
Merci!!
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I have no idea why but the name of this deviation is really awesome. I wish I could give some useful feedback, but my mind is really clouded at the moment. I'll just add this to my favorites and get back you later...
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I was actually thinking the english of it was not correct (That's not my native language). I'm glad you like it!
Thank you !
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Okay, I admit the grammar isn't right, but it really doesn't matter here. The combination of words is still appealing. What is your native language?
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It's French. How could I say it ? I just felt it sounded good, knowing it wasn't right.
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Clearly your intuition lead to using English better than those who are native to it.
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