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sorry is damn right!
Nah just kidding hugs luv ya
You need to like, make gumball an actual character soon-ish, not just have him as a faceless rivalry for Mar-mar or he's the equivalent of the lock on Fionna's chastity belt. Don't let him be a lock, the gum royals are actually great characters D:
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How did you know 0-0 he's in the next page...!
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because I am sort of psychic, my dear. And I have faith in your writing abilities. Word.
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Actually, shhh... My friend wrote this story I wish I could write plot and endings well but I just can't ;-; I just helped out a little by editing the dialogue to make it sound more in character, for example- for cake she wrote "don't listen to him. He's wrong." And I tweaked it to "Marshall lee is a doof. A total doof! You have elevendy thousand chances with gumball!". Ehh now I feel bad
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oh ohhhh, i see... Hemm. Does your friend have an account? 'cause if so, you should take to crediting her at the bottom of the pages, just 'cause it's polite dearie. And actually believe it or not, i could see both lines working haha
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No, she wrote the story somewhere else and told me that I had full permission to use it... Great, now I feel like a shit
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no no no no no if she gave you permission then it's allllll good :3
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I only check deviantart for the next ones! KEEP GOING
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Wowwowowowww that makes me happy
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This opened my interest,please do more is do damn awsome
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Nahhh sleep is fir people that don't adventure
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Yeeaaaaa love it sister moment hope there's more nice job
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