Comments: 14
FerrariBoy9100 [2010-09-19 03:21:25 +0000 UTC]
Read it. Loved it.
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palmereap [2010-09-12 22:48:10 +0000 UTC]
Even though I haven't read the other parts, It's good, It keeps me interested, and you can Imagine the world in the story quite easily.
some random grammar mistakes but meh, who cares about that lol...
The picture/art helps to imagine the scene and injuries even more...great stuff...
You continually get better and better lol
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Maxooos In reply to akitos [2010-09-10 10:22:26 +0000 UTC]
thank you ^^
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