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MasterThymos — I'm Sorry...
Published: 2010-09-23 21:36:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 319; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 1
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Description I'm sorry
That I couldn't make it work
I'm sorry
That we both wound up so hurt.

I didn't mean for it to end this way
Is it my fault? It's hard to say

But now I'm stuck in jail
And you're stuck alone
And all this heartache
Cuts me to the bone

Oh how do you feel?
Do you feel the same?
Is there that pain in the chest
That you cannot name?

I miss you
And I have to let you know
I miss you
But I have to let you go.
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Comments: 3

TaChan-Zeitman [2010-12-22 19:14:03 +0000 UTC]

Makes me think of a relationship I was in once. It's sad like that. I like it. For some reason it gives me that old pang of pain. ^-^;;

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Royston-Crow [2010-09-24 01:58:08 +0000 UTC]

I like it!
Personally I think you should go into a bit more into the darkness but well done all the same!

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MasterThymos In reply to Royston-Crow [2010-09-24 02:11:50 +0000 UTC]

There's plenty of darkness in my other poems. This was something that was needed to be said in a short, concise way.

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