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MasterThymos — Apocalyptic Lullaby
Published: 2010-01-27 08:57:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 548; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 1
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Description Hush little one and go to sleep
I don't want your pretty eyes to weep
Lay your head down on my chest.
I'll keep watch from east to west.

Nothing will come to do you harm.
And I'll always be here to keep you warm.
Keeping watch with shield and blade.
My determination shall never fade.

Though death and destruction is all around
I'm always here so you sleep sound
And when you awaken we shall play
As if nothing wrong happened yesterday.

We'll move on again like we always do.
Going on to explore somewhere new.
Making our way from place to place
Don't need to hurry, it's not a race

I'll gladly kill to keep you alive.
It makes me happy to see you thrive
And though my conscience isn't clear
There's not a thing that you should fear.
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Comments: 13

DeeJay1441 [2012-01-27 06:01:55 +0000 UTC]

This is nice. ^-^

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MasterThymos In reply to DeeJay1441 [2012-01-28 20:56:49 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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DeeJay1441 In reply to MasterThymos [2012-01-29 06:25:08 +0000 UTC]

Why you're welcome.

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TaChan-Zeitman [2010-12-24 10:52:55 +0000 UTC]

It's a great poem. It makes me think of a character of mines. Anyways, I think this is one of my favorite poems from you. I love it.

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deathly-shadows [2010-07-14 19:20:28 +0000 UTC]

one of my many favorite's!!! actually i don't have many but it sounds better saying 'one of many' don't u think so?

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JonironFajr [2010-01-28 05:20:36 +0000 UTC]

[link] I love this poem Drako.

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MasterThymos In reply to JonironFajr [2010-01-29 16:07:29 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^,,^

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refloc [2010-01-27 22:12:49 +0000 UTC]

Nice. ^_^

Only thing I might point out is that there are a few places where your tempo gets slightly off and you have one or two more syllables than the actual tune-- but when you're writing new words to something it's difficult to get it exact.

I like it!

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MasterThymos In reply to refloc [2010-01-27 22:26:46 +0000 UTC]

I tried to get it as best I could >,,< and I might tweak a little still. But I am intensely satisfied with it already. Also, out of curiosity, how'd you find my poem? O,,o

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refloc In reply to MasterThymos [2010-02-06 12:09:12 +0000 UTC]

Oh.... I happen to be someone you know from Gaia darling. Guess.

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MasterThymos In reply to refloc [2010-02-07 04:32:02 +0000 UTC]

HotRed?

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SavantSamantha [2010-01-27 14:46:08 +0000 UTC]

Von Disco says:

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MasterThymos In reply to SavantSamantha [2010-01-27 18:22:42 +0000 UTC]

Thankies ^,,^

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