Comments: 13
DeeJay1441 [2012-01-27 06:01:55 +0000 UTC]
This is nice. ^-^
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TaChan-Zeitman [2010-12-24 10:52:55 +0000 UTC]
It's a great poem. It makes me think of a character of mines. Anyways, I think this is one of my favorite poems from you. I love it.
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deathly-shadows [2010-07-14 19:20:28 +0000 UTC]
one of my many favorite's!!! actually i don't have many but it sounds better saying 'one of many' don't u think so?
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refloc [2010-01-27 22:12:49 +0000 UTC]
Nice. ^_^
Only thing I might point out is that there are a few places where your tempo gets slightly off and you have one or two more syllables than the actual tune-- but when you're writing new words to something it's difficult to get it exact.
I like it!
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MasterThymos In reply to refloc [2010-01-27 22:26:46 +0000 UTC]
I tried to get it as best I could >,,< and I might tweak a little still. But I am intensely satisfied with it already. Also, out of curiosity, how'd you find my poem? O,,o
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