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Published: 2010-05-21 07:16:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 3501; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 54
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Snupin Burrito is a slash doujinshi. It is based on an RP by and I that begins here .Slash, slightly AU, impending buttsex. Other, but that would give stuff away. And I don't own this, of course.
Cover of Lore III.
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I have a question, where is Remus, he was there a few pages ago, and we can see Siri and James easy, so where is he? and based on the next page, I'm guessing Petter is behind Sev's head. Love Sev's expressions.
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Remus is right next to James and above Severus's head. He just hasn't got a face for this pageXD.
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Ahhh. LOL why doesn't he have a face? I thought that might be him, but faceless without anything special, I assumed it was a random person.
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He's just not the focus at the moment. Do you think I should have given him one@_@?
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Something that distinguished him, like James has Glasses, Sirius's hair, Peter's annoyingness, Remy's.......scars?
idk it just bothers me when main characters fall into the background and then you can't figure out what happened to them, spending several minutes finding them in the background.
I am randomly picky about things, i don't get why somethings bother me, ie Remus without anything special, and something similar doesn't ie. drawing someone completely different than cannon, but with the distinguishing features.
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I think your values are in the right place, though. You're right, and I hadn't thought about it. This is why I post the pages of this, though, instead of keeping them to myself. Comments like this can make me a better manga-ka! So I really appreciate it. I'll definitely be more concious about this.
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Although, it is funny, when you can't for the life of you figure out where someone went, so continue reading, then discover that s/he had left the room or whatever, just hadn't been mentioned, although it should have been noticed by the talking of a secret they didn't know ^.^;; (In case you don't get it, I read one fanfiction, and a chara dissapeared, spent about 30min trying to find him, to discover he had left, and realized they had talked about something he shouldn't know about ^.^;; )
I thought you posted them for our enjoyment? ^.^
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Jeez, taht would drive me crazy in a fanfictionXD.
Well, yes, that's rather flattering to know that people actually enjoy something I'm making. I posted them thinking... I need to get better, let people rip me to shredsXD.
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Luckly that happened early in my reading on fanfiction, so i keep an eye out for it.
Rip you to shreads? With so little Snupin out there? Are you insane? I've read this (whole thing) at lease 10 times!
If anyone does, don't listen to them, you rock! I was saddened when I went to the moutains and would not know the INSTANT you posted another!
If anyone does, let your readers know, and they will rip THEM to shreads!
P.S. The capitalized is b/c of no italics ^.^;;
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Aww, that's very nice! But I don't mind if people are criticalXD. I didn't realise there was a Snupin shortage, though. Maybe after this one and after the Snarry one, I could do another one where they're adults or something. Who knows!
Oh, and if you want to italicise, you can just use html tags. With no spaces, do this < i >This is the italics part< / i >
And it looks like this here!
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Well I mean good snupin.
Did I just give you ideas? ^.^
Yeah, but I hate the tags, i always get confused on how to type them, so i'm just used to THIS meaning this in my mind. ^.^
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What is good Snupin in your opinion, though?
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In Art:
Not horriably drawn, possiably drawn due to reading a fanfiction (with a link to it), idc if there is plot.
Hopefully they have more than just the one peice.
They don't look like other people ie. drawing what was supposed to be James/Sirius, but looking like James or Harry/Sirius or Severus
In Fanfiction:
Not the dreaded all on paragraph, hopefully some kind of plot. Not just because Sirius died. etc.
(I'll read just about anything that isn't James centric, I really hate him since book 5)
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I always hated JamesXD. I think you'll like our next doujinshi, then. It is Snarry and all, but still...
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I like Snarry, but you have converted my OTPs around. I was a rabid Drarry and SB/RL fan, but now its Drarry and Snupin, though im reading the diff fanfictions were the chara read the books right now.
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Snarry is still my OTP, I have to admitXD. And the Snarry story we're working on does have SBxRL. That's basically canon... isn't it?
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YAY! I LOVE YOU!!!! Duh SB/RL is Cannon, DIE TONKS DIE!!!!!!! -banchee scream- ^.^ I can't wait for the new one, but I love this one, but the new one, but this one, but----ARRRRGGGG!!!! Just get them both up ASAP ^.^;; I'll be all kinds of happy!
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Well, we're not finished writing the Snarry one, yet. Harry is still a year oldXD. He's currently having a fight with Draco...
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Stop fighting with Dray! -continues- I said STOP!!!!!!! (Is Dray paired with anyone?)
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I think maybe he'll fancy Hermione, but it will be unrequited? Maybe he can end up with Ginny. Do you have any suggestions?
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Well, other than Harry, (Please not Hermione I can't stand Dramione), poss the twins? (both that is), or another weasely not Ginny or Ron (I really hate them, more Ginny), or, if he must be straight, anyone but Pansy, maybe idk, i can't stand Dray straight ^.^;;
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Oh, wow. Well, I just don't want to make everyone gay. If people would prefer, I can just leave him single. He doesn't actually play that big of a role in the story. I had some plot ideas around Draco fancying a girl, but they're minor.
I was definitely going to put Ron and Hermione together, though.
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Yeah, just leave him single and kill Pansy at some point, it will make me happy! ^.^;;
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Kill herXD? I wasn't even actually thinking of her playing any kind of a major role. This doujinshi will be... very far from canon. Much more so than Snupin Burrito.
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Aw fine -pout- include a dragon? pleaseeeee? I<3 dragons!
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A dragon, huh? Okay. As an enemy? As something else?
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IDK I kinda love the tiny hungarian horntail Harry got year 4, maybe have it do something to play a part in driving them together?
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The only thing about that is that by fourth year, canon is completely shattered and gone. I can try to put a small dragon in there somewhere, thoughXD.
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Yay, cannon is shattered! BOOYA! Small dragon = win! Thanks! Never liked cannon....that's probably due to Sirius's death, and book 7 (the horror). Any dumbledore bashing?
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Well, it is called Dastardly Lemondrops if that gives you any hint. He's not exactly a good guy.
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LOL auesome, I'll say more when im not sneaking on while dad's trying to fix the printer ^.^;;
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Yeah, you totally shouldXD.
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Now im on hours before anyone is awake! WOOT! Like everyday, get up early go to bed late. I'll say more when I'm done with the things i do daily.....i might be getting my hair dyed and have it(laptop) back by tonight if my plan works.
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yeah, it is now, not the whole things, red streaks!
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Red? Really? I hope it looks all right. That's not a colour that looks good on many people.
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I like it. I bleached it first and i have darkish (used to be really dark) brown hair. My friend likes it too. that's good enough ^.^
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awwww snapes expression is adorable!!!! I LOVE IT!!!! XD
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Hehe, I really liked drawing that frame. I changed it a lot from drawing to inking, though!
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