Mijyandkikiloli [2019-06-24 16:08:22 +0000 UTC]
hello I'd like to give a comment on your piece for devprojectcomment: - ProjectComment
To start i'd like to say that the way you shade in my honest opinion is very smooth. The way you created an abstract style of the pose is quite interesting. Though the illustration is done we especially the way you color and shade I would like to point that shading of the hair distracts me a little. I suggest that you should have gone for a dark color for the shading behind the hair.
Also i love how you made her eyes shine and pop from the illustration it just really makes the character stand out. the background is not very intricate and is more simple. I like the contrast of bright and simple background from detailed characters because it doesn't make it hard to focus on the character.
overall this is well done piece of Festivia.
i found this piece while i was browsing through the gallery and yours stood out to me because i like your art style. i wanted to share my opinion of your work so that i could help you see what i think needs improvement in your work. i hope my comment helps.
have an amazing day.
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JustALittleAmerican [2019-06-24 04:32:33 +0000 UTC]
I really don't like how you used more gray shading on the skin.
Gray doesn't go good on skin normally.
Try Brown or a reddish color. Whatever you think.
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ProtoTEnterprise [2019-06-23 20:26:27 +0000 UTC]
Hi! I´m from
Hmmm... <)
The style of the drawing makes me have already seen it somewhere in this month. I wonder what it will be, besides that it has a quite similar name, that of Butterfly ... xD ...
But leaving that doubt aside, I like the design of the girl; Exploits the imaginative abilities, very expressive, excellent range of colors and well selected, good lighting and shading, great anatomy, dynamism in its pose, great range of details, each part of the drawing amazes itself and together make it a great wonder visual
Keep it up! <3
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