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DinosaurMaster [2016-05-06 20:21:34 +0000 UTC]
Maybe you should make a story to go with this picture like some of your other works. Β If you do, please make sure that Serena doesn't argue with someone else for Calem's affections.
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Manpersonguy In reply to DinosaurMaster [2016-05-06 20:43:52 +0000 UTC]
I might, one day...
What didn't you like about the love triangle, though?
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DinosaurMaster In reply to Manpersonguy [2016-05-06 20:46:04 +0000 UTC]
When Serena and Shauna were arguing over who liked Calem more. It just makes me a little uneasy
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Manpersonguy In reply to DinosaurMaster [2016-05-06 21:00:29 +0000 UTC]
Oh, okay. If I make a story based off of this, I could make it a sequel where Calem and Serena are dating or something.
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Manpersonguy In reply to DinosaurMaster [2016-05-06 21:23:44 +0000 UTC]
So, what was it about Serena and Shauna arguing that made you uncomfortable? I'd like to know so I can avoid it next time.
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DinosaurMaster In reply to Manpersonguy [2016-05-06 21:43:41 +0000 UTC]
Yes it was Serena and Shauna`s arguing that upsets me. Thanks for your concern my good friend!
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Manpersonguy In reply to DinosaurMaster [2016-05-06 22:16:45 +0000 UTC]
But is there anything specific that upset you, or was it just them arguing?
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DinosaurMaster In reply to Manpersonguy [2016-05-08 02:26:19 +0000 UTC]
It was just their arguing, nothing else. Β Also, maybe you make Shauna want to help Calem get Serena's attention in this new story. Β F.Y.I, you could just change the word balloon in the title to berry so readers don't get confused between the two stories.
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Manpersonguy In reply to DinosaurMaster [2016-05-08 02:33:06 +0000 UTC]
Don't worry, I've got my own plans for the story. Thank you very much for the feedback, though.
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TheJuicer987 [2016-04-17 21:14:08 +0000 UTC]
Wouldn't he be cherry? XD
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Manpersonguy In reply to TheJuicer987 [2016-04-17 21:20:06 +0000 UTC]
Nah. It's like how Hilbert and Hilda are swelling up like Oran Berries, not blueberries.
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