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Manga-Queen-17 — Onceler x DaughterNature! Reader part 7
Published: 2014-01-05 23:50:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 4781; Favourites: 48; Downloads: 0
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Description Onceler x DaughterNature! Reader part 7

(Now for the horrible bit, I need to get it out the way before it ends happily for Onceler)

Soon you came to regret ever trusting the Onceler. After his product, the Thneed became successful, his family came to partake in the business by moving to the Valley. At first, you had been happy for him; his family were just like your mother but worse, they never appreciated him and now they supported him.

Within a week, Onceler had broken his deal with you and started chopping down every one of the trees that gave the Valley its tranquillity.

However, you tried to intervene at every chance you had to get the Onceler back. You tried everything; making flowers grow in the machinery, bending any nearby water into the factory, everything you could think of. Your damage never lasted for long, though.

You also tried to talk to the Onceler yourself. But every time, he acted like you weren't even there. It was like you could hardly recognize your dear Oncie any more. He didn't even look like your Onceler, with his green suit and everything. Nothing worked, you couldn't save him from himself.

Slowly, your Valley started to lose its beauty and life and became a barren and polluted wasteland. The animals all coughed nowadays. It broke your heart to see your home and its inhabitants fall apart. Not even the Lorax could do anything as the last Truffula tree suddenly fell.

The thud resounded for a moment.

"Oncie, look around you" you pleaded as your tears fell from your (e/c) eyes.

This time, Onceler heard your voice. He saw the damage for the first time since his business had started its successful journey. His family had forsaken him and left him here on his own. "No" he whispered softly.

Lorax ranted at Onceler about what he had done and that the Valley was now dead.

The old you would've defended the Onceler. Now, you were too heartbroken to say anything.

Lorax then turned and evacuated all of the animals, including Oncie's little donkey, Melvin. He left a stone with the word 'Unless' engraved in it and rose into the sky.

Onceler turned around and finally saw you. "(Name), I..." he attempted to apologise.

"Save your words, Onceler. I had warned you but you acted like I wasn't even there. I had to watch my home die. I can't keep my promise to a man who breaks his word over something as frivolous as wealth. I'm sorry, Onceler, but I can't" you said sadly as you walked on air back to the heavens. Leaving the man you once loved heartbroken.

No matter what, you still loved Onceler. That's why you were heartbroken. You decided to secretly keep watch over him in the heavens.
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Comments: 192

Manga-Queen-17 In reply to ??? [2016-06-20 21:55:49 +0000 UTC]

so sorry

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DarkSilhouettes [2015-01-31 03:32:28 +0000 UTC]

Waiting for eight. You don't have to rush.

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Manga-Queen-17 In reply to DarkSilhouettes [2015-01-31 07:22:18 +0000 UTC]

It's already out, check my gallery

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DarkSilhouettes In reply to Manga-Queen-17 [2015-01-31 15:26:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I feel stupid now. [Tears up and sniffles.)

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Manga-Queen-17 In reply to DarkSilhouettes [2015-01-31 15:27:31 +0000 UTC]

It's ok!

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Sonyamaneski [2015-01-08 22:31:21 +0000 UTC]

There is gonna be a part 8 right?

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Manga-Queen-17 In reply to Sonyamaneski [2015-01-08 22:58:53 +0000 UTC]

Yep

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Sonyamaneski In reply to Manga-Queen-17 [2015-01-09 04:13:43 +0000 UTC]

Yayy!

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Manga-Queen-17 In reply to Sonyamaneski [2015-01-09 08:50:35 +0000 UTC]

Heh

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Sonyamaneski In reply to Manga-Queen-17 [2015-01-09 20:05:40 +0000 UTC]

I'll wait patiently like a good little fangirl

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Manga-Queen-17 In reply to Sonyamaneski [2015-01-09 20:13:56 +0000 UTC]

Ok, only two more.

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Sonyamaneski In reply to Manga-Queen-17 [2015-01-09 20:15:22 +0000 UTC]

That's ok

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Manga-Queen-17 In reply to Sonyamaneski [2015-01-09 20:15:47 +0000 UTC]

ok

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Sonyamaneski In reply to Manga-Queen-17 [2015-01-09 20:16:31 +0000 UTC]

^u^

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Manga-Queen-17 In reply to Sonyamaneski [2015-01-09 20:19:35 +0000 UTC]

XD

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Sonyamaneski In reply to Manga-Queen-17 [2015-01-09 20:24:45 +0000 UTC]

😊

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Manga-Queen-17 In reply to Sonyamaneski [2015-01-09 20:27:55 +0000 UTC]

XD Yep. How have you been enjoying the series so far?

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Sonyamaneski In reply to Manga-Queen-17 [2015-01-09 20:28:46 +0000 UTC]

Yes I have

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Manga-Queen-17 In reply to Sonyamaneski [2015-01-09 20:29:35 +0000 UTC]

What was your favourite part so far?

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Sonyamaneski In reply to Manga-Queen-17 [2015-01-09 20:38:39 +0000 UTC]

I think part 3

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Manga-Queen-17 In reply to Sonyamaneski [2015-01-09 20:40:56 +0000 UTC]

Where Reader makes the promise?

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Sonyamaneski In reply to Manga-Queen-17 [2015-01-09 20:46:56 +0000 UTC]

Yeah and when Mother Nature shows up

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Manga-Queen-17 In reply to Sonyamaneski [2015-01-09 20:47:52 +0000 UTC]

Or as Reader calls her, Mother.

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Sonyamaneski In reply to Manga-Queen-17 [2015-01-09 20:48:38 +0000 UTC]

Yes mother dearest ^u^

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Manga-Queen-17 In reply to Sonyamaneski [2015-01-09 20:49:41 +0000 UTC]

Of all daughters with overprotective mothers, Mother Nature's daughter has it worst.

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Sonyamaneski In reply to Manga-Queen-17 [2015-01-09 20:53:00 +0000 UTC]

And now she's gonna be I told you so to reader

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Manga-Queen-17 In reply to Sonyamaneski [2015-01-09 20:57:41 +0000 UTC]

Yeah...

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Sonyamaneski In reply to Manga-Queen-17 [2015-01-09 23:19:54 +0000 UTC]

That's gonna be fun 😑

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Manga-Queen-17 In reply to Sonyamaneski [2015-01-09 23:22:07 +0000 UTC]

Yeah

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Sonyamaneski In reply to Manga-Queen-17 [2015-01-09 23:24:08 +0000 UTC]

Oh well it was gonna happen right?

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Manga-Queen-17 In reply to Sonyamaneski [2015-01-09 23:25:05 +0000 UTC]

What was?

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Sonyamaneski In reply to Manga-Queen-17 [2015-01-09 23:26:53 +0000 UTC]

Mother Nature doing an "I told you so"

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Manga-Queen-17 In reply to Sonyamaneski [2015-01-09 23:30:01 +0000 UTC]

Maybe...

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Sonyamaneski In reply to Manga-Queen-17 [2015-01-09 23:31:36 +0000 UTC]

She is I can tell

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Manga-Queen-17 In reply to Sonyamaneski [2015-01-09 23:34:21 +0000 UTC]

She might do

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Sonyamaneski In reply to Manga-Queen-17 [2015-01-09 23:41:21 +0000 UTC]

Oh boy

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Manga-Queen-17 In reply to Sonyamaneski [2015-01-09 23:42:04 +0000 UTC]

you never know

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Sonyamaneski In reply to Manga-Queen-17 [2015-01-09 23:43:28 +0000 UTC]

True

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Manga-Queen-17 In reply to Sonyamaneski [2015-01-09 23:44:00 +0000 UTC]

^^

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ask-BlitzandRocket [2014-10-23 05:59:33 +0000 UTC]

Is part 8 out yet?the feels ;-;

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Manga-Queen-17 In reply to ask-BlitzandRocket [2014-10-23 06:06:16 +0000 UTC]

Not yet, I'm having trouble with writing that chapter.

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ask-BlitzandRocket In reply to Manga-Queen-17 [2014-10-23 22:11:33 +0000 UTC]

Oki! I'll be patient

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Manga-Queen-17 In reply to ask-BlitzandRocket [2014-10-23 22:20:07 +0000 UTC]

Ok

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broken4ufromkb [2014-09-21 18:53:41 +0000 UTC]

part 8?

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Manga-Queen-17 In reply to broken4ufromkb [2014-09-21 19:13:06 +0000 UTC]

I'm having a bit of trouble on that

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broken4ufromkb In reply to Manga-Queen-17 [2014-09-21 19:14:00 +0000 UTC]

oh, okay then good luck!

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Manga-Queen-17 In reply to broken4ufromkb [2014-09-21 20:46:41 +0000 UTC]

thanx

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Fancy-Walrus [2014-07-17 03:06:59 +0000 UTC]

NO. THAT BETTER NOT BE THE ENDING. ;-; YOU CAN'T JUST END AN AMAZING STORY LIKE THIS. DON'T DO THIS TO ME. I LOVE YOUR STORY TOO MUCH

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Manga-Queen-17 In reply to Fancy-Walrus [2014-07-17 07:16:20 +0000 UTC]

Don't worry, it's not the end

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Fancy-Walrus In reply to Manga-Queen-17 [2014-07-21 15:44:03 +0000 UTC]

Hallelujah!

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