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manchaliaina — Good Night
Published: 2006-07-06 14:55:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 266; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 13
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It wasn't me, I didn't leavethe house on fire like that, I wouldn't
strand a kitten up a tree, I'm a good
girl I am. Wasn't me, I didn't eat
any canaries, steal candy, leave
babies crying, I'm not that
kind of girl.
I was just standing here.
And so it was
that you walked by, and so it was that you
caught my eye. And so it was I asked for
one last dance we didn't quite dance
and so it was I thought we could
go places.
Tell me
can we
go places
in you car tonight? Is it late enough
to be early, do you think this music's
loud enough to carry, do you think
I'm drink enough to swim you, do you
think we could be in
for a long ride?
What I'd give
for a nice
long ride.
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Comments: 15
I absolutely love this one. It's got a different flow then most of your others but it's truly fabulous.
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Actually, I'm really agreeing on the song thing!
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I dare you to write a crappy poem. This is the first 'Cheap and Tawdry' poem on dA that I've liked.
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do you think
I'm drink enough to swim you?
i think the thoughts you think might sound a lot like the most beautiful music i've ever heard.
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Right back atcha, y'know.
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The slight rhythm and repetition make me think that this could be transformed into a song.
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I will think about this. Thank you!
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I'm drink enough to swim you, do you
did you mean "drunk?"
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ohh, i see now. i read it too quickly the first time.
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Tell me
can we
go places
in you car tonight? Is it late enough
to be early, do you think this music's
loud enough to carry, do you think
I'm drink enough to swim you, do you
think we could be in
for a long ride?
What I'd give
for a nice
long ride
This entire section is fantastic! Hot and tawdry...I'd say that's an affirmative 
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