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Mamiru — Evolution of Aliv
Published: 2013-10-04 23:43:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 757; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 1
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Jumping on the bandwagon~! Eeheh he sure has changed a lot over the years, or I guess my drawing style is what's changed.That first one though....
I hope you enjoy the special commentary too.
I'll scrap this later.
I don't know what's sadder that first Aliv or the fact I had to throw in the fem!Aliv meme because I have so few revamps OTL
LOLOL I wasn't expecting to get reviews on this? Since it was mainly for fun, I'm very confused as to why people wanted to review it but uhh yeah, I'll probably be turning that feature off from now on xD
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The genwral look of it all was good from the start though proporions needed work in the earlier pics and a bit more free flow was needed.... this was seen by december (the girl ) which was much more free fliwing and needed a tough of work improvment on the colour and as you have progressed u can see the work on the colours being applied... leading to a good piece of work in septemeber 2013 ... the one thing i would like to see is all of them rdrawn by ur current standerdsame poses same clothes ect... just show atrue difference from then and now like a draw this again meme
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To be honest, the one that really caught my attention was the girl. XD well, I just thought the way you have drawn his female version was cute.
Okay, I'll tell you what, one by one...
The first one was colored pretty nice but the way it was drawn is a bit off for me. Your coloring defended your drawing skills but it doesn't it's perfect to be exact because you didn't balance the head with the body.
Second, was actually pretty good. It's a big success in developing your skills in line art. Although, the angle of the neck to the head was too stiff. Your coloring is somewhat how manga artists color in the old days and I am simply impress on this one.
Third, is close to perfection though the whole body became a bit stiff. Some parts are too long and too short. The coloring is much better on this one too. I love it.
Fourth, your shading became too smooth that it's like trying to be realistic in a way that it doesn't fit with the drawing style. But the way you have drawn the body in this one improved and it has a much better structure than before.
Fifth, I don't know what on earth happened but you lost everything on this one... This is super smooth that it hurts the eye. You didn't even finish shading it but since it's a WIP it can be excluded.
Sixth, no stiff bodies, no over exagge smoothing level, no unbalance shading. Just right! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
Anyways, all and all it's a wonderful improvement. ^u^
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omgggg girll look at this evolution of amazing Aliv HAHA UGHH THE LAST TWO ARE SO BEAUTIFUL I JUST /GRABS YOU AND SHAKES YOU KEEP GOING OKAY I WILL TRY HARD TO CATCH UP AND AND YEAH HAHA <3333333333333
Also, that 3rd pose /chokes Aliv watare you doing LOLL
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AHSVGDKASH H-HE'S SUPPOSED TO BE PUTTING UP HIS HAIR.
WHAT DO YOU MEAN CATCH UP?!?! If we were running on treadmills you'd be right beside me~! going like 50x faster than me
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It improved quite a lot! Love it! :3
December 2011 and September 2013 really caught my eye
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Ahh thank you! I'll keep working hard to improve! o u o
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I am gunna do a criteuqe .. ur not gunna like it.... but i will be honest.. but i will say i love the december2011 style and the september 2013 style
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Hahahaha no no don't worry, honesty is great! I didn't mind at all, thank you!
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I love seeing things like this! Good job! Keep working hard
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AHSVDHSAVHKA thank you~! ;; u ;; )/
/hopes to one day be pro like you
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//amg, thank you! *u* Draw lots then! ^u^ <3
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