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Published: 2005-07-29 04:04:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 2093; Favourites: 57; Downloads: 388
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MAN, that was so hard!! i havent tried painting water in like forever!?!? DAMN.(and no, stubborn me refused to get a ref. T_T but its over with finally..*kisses the tablet*)
critiques on light, color and application would be much appriciated on this one. <3
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great work with the water, the highlights are dead on
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hehe, I know....Hey, how come you never talkto me on teh phone anymore?..=___=;;;
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o.0 huh? my phone hasnt rang for the past 3 days. i havent called you because i've been house/baby sitting for the past week so i've had my hands full with cleaening and washing and cooking and taking care of stuff and the cat and the pool and the garden and the grocery shopping. =_=;;;;
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I JUST CALLEED THIS MORNING WOMAN!!!!!!
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my. phone. did. not. ring.
or else i would have picked it up.
i'll give you a call tonight maybe but right now i dont even have my phone cuz i lend it to my friend to make it easier for him to pick up his parents from the airport.
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o___O but I swear I've been calling you non stop for days now...*tear* okay,well now I don't feel so rejected as I did before
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The water composition looks great i like the shiny look and ya did it with a tablet 
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first i gotta say i LOVE the pose really cute and not too overly sexy for critique i cant say a whole lot id prolly change the lighting a lil bit its kinda all over the place but its not horrible at all mostly in the face i notice it but i love the colors you chose they all go together well an i think the water looks really good too sorry if this was harsh just trying to help ya as much as i can
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: D no prob! i need the help! ^^ 
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I haven't got much to complain about. Only compliments I'm afraid.
Original POV. Bonus points.
Unorthodox lay-out and clipping. Draws the attention to the water which you put a lot of effort in. Focuses on your ass instead of the face being the usual center point of your compositions... refreshing... More bonus points.
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The water looks so awesome. I love the colors you used for it. It also kinda looks like shes coming out of a pool of silk X3 Or melted metal which is way too cool. I mean dont get me wrong it looks just LIKE water! But im dead tierd and Im dumb lol. The colors in the hair are so pretty. And the Prespective is awesome. I really like the butt X3
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well the lighting is the only thing odd, if the lighing is coming from directly above--ie the sun-- then the shaddows on her butt should be on the opposite side (on bottom not on top) but that's all I see.
other wise you did great!
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its more in an evening setting , like a sunset actually. so the sun wouldnt be above her and the colors would be more true to the lighting.
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I see.... then the highlights on the water are what is off, cause they appear strait on the top. that's all. ^^
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Fantastic job on the water ripples. They can be a real Bi-0tchy!
Is this character supposed to be you or is it a character you created? You have a very impressive style that's unique and I can always tell when you've done something. And it's fun to see the character in lots of different pieces.
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yia, its supposed to be me..hope that doesnt make me seem all up in myself..o.0;;; Allot of these should be put under portraits, but it doesnt matter to me as long as i get to express myself. ^_^
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You're style of coloring is soooo unique I love you art soo much. And I love T&A
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Dood, I really like this one ^_^ The top view is a really good idea, and the colours for the water is very nice. Hrem, maybe the water would look more natural without the black lines? Although looking at the whole pic, the strong line art does make it look ok! Other than that, the ripple effect is grooooovy
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yia, i kept the black lines cuz thats the 17 in the picture if you look closely enough, otherwise i was dieing to take em out! -_-
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yes very nice
you made a beautiful sexy girl, and your whater is not so bad ^^
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y'know, speaking of tablets, my stylus got destroyed a few days before i left. Do you know if its possible to but just the stylus someplace, or am i screwed and have to get a whole new tablet?
oh yeah i knew i forgot something,..."NIce aSS!"
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lol its almost like shes saying "que!" but like everybody else here, i also like her assets XO i think the water came out real nice for no refs. and did she just come out of the water? if so, it could use more glistening from the water droplets. but to reduce labor u might BS and say shes been in that pose for like 30 minutes and the water dried off. well nice coloring either way. hmmmm what tablet do u posess? a graphire? an intuous? or maybe even the cintiq? (or however its spelled) all of them cost a pretty penny.
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i have an intuous. luckily i got mine for free! this guy who had hardnipples for me since 10thgrade saw me at flippers bout a year back and i started being his friend again so he just gave me the tablet..o.0 i stopped going to flippers about a month after that. the end. XD ho ho ho ho ho! there are the cheap ones..but yia. cheap is cheap. : |
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lmao!! well thats one way to get one. but i think i lack the ability to make a guys nipples hard.
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I'm guessin' the lights comin' from behind... if so; lookin' good. ;D
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Yeah.. I'm gonna say this is my favorite of them so far.... MY REASONS ARE MY OWN *poof*
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you did that with a tablet it's awesome nice job I've only done to 2 drawings with my tablet aqnd there nothing compared to this the colours are great nice job please critique on mine if you could I need help thnxs
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what exactly do you need a critique on? lines, color, originality? you have creature stuff and i'm more familiar with humans and landscapes.
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like just a better understanding on the tablet sorry if I bothered you
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