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Published: 2014-08-24 16:43:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 2896; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 0
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In Hermione's room in the Head dorm.I'm not sure who Hermione's jealous of, Draco? or Crookshanks.
*My English is bad. If I have errors, I'm sorry.
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Just some suggestions on the English
Hermione: "You're A traitor" or "You traitor". You're is you are so the way you have it, she's saying "You are traitor"
For "Shut up! Malfoy", move the exclamation point to the end of the sentence so it's "Shut up Malfoy!" It looks better and makes more sense than to spilt up the sentence.
Same with Malfoy's "Jealous huh? Granger" Put the question mark at the end. "Jealous huh Granger?"
Love the drawing!
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Thank you very much :'))) I'll be careful next time.
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