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Description Days gone bye
By magicman1998
Days gone bye, when I saw her die. I wish I could fly, up in the sky. To see her face, with so much grace. So much love, as a flying dove. I saw her fly, in the sky. I saw her die, days gone bye.
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Comments: 39

jazewel [2013-11-24 00:37:06 +0000 UTC]

This is really well written! I like how you made each sentence rhyme with itself ;D

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Magicman1998 In reply to jazewel [2013-11-27 00:01:36 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much!!!!

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KarelysLuna [2012-08-14 17:21:15 +0000 UTC]

Love this!

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Magicman1998 In reply to KarelysLuna [2012-08-14 18:45:40 +0000 UTC]

thank you for reading!!

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C-Allagash [2012-08-12 13:07:40 +0000 UTC]

Hello,

Feature here:
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Please, let me know if there's any problem

Cheers!

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Magicman1998 In reply to C-Allagash [2012-08-14 03:16:36 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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SwissBoolahbidiglah8 [2012-08-06 05:14:35 +0000 UTC]

This is....heartbreaking....I know this feeling though, of missing someone I mean.

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Magicman1998 In reply to SwissBoolahbidiglah8 [2012-08-06 12:04:52 +0000 UTC]

oh nobody died i was just wanting to write something sad but yes it is sad!!

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XxItsBitterSweetxX [2012-08-02 19:02:28 +0000 UTC]

touching...at least for me

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Magicman1998 In reply to XxItsBitterSweetxX [2012-08-02 19:05:56 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much!!

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XxItsBitterSweetxX In reply to Magicman1998 [2012-08-02 19:10:20 +0000 UTC]

sure. i love finding other writers and reading what they have to say

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Magicman1998 In reply to XxItsBitterSweetxX [2012-08-02 19:10:49 +0000 UTC]

well thank you!!

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kaleecee [2012-07-30 15:59:22 +0000 UTC]

Wow... sad! Good piece!

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Magicman1998 In reply to kaleecee [2012-07-30 19:38:13 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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Nati90 [2012-07-16 05:55:38 +0000 UTC]

so sad...

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Magicman1998 In reply to Nati90 [2012-07-16 11:40:02 +0000 UTC]

thanks for reading

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TaylorLuver1 [2012-07-16 02:39:04 +0000 UTC]

that was sad..tasteful and catchy...but sad

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Magicman1998 In reply to TaylorLuver1 [2012-07-16 02:39:35 +0000 UTC]

well thank you for reading

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doborah [2012-07-15 21:53:39 +0000 UTC]

sad but beautiful, good job

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Magicman1998 In reply to doborah [2012-07-15 21:54:57 +0000 UTC]

thank you for reading!

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LadySnowPaws1115 [2012-07-14 17:04:18 +0000 UTC]

<3

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Glaceal [2012-07-14 16:54:53 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful.

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Magicman1998 In reply to Glaceal [2012-07-14 16:57:49 +0000 UTC]

thank you!!!

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Run-With-ur-Heart [2012-07-14 16:53:20 +0000 UTC]

i can really imagine this.. its beautiful

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Magicman1998 In reply to Run-With-ur-Heart [2012-07-14 16:54:39 +0000 UTC]

thank you!!!!

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giveyourheartawish [2012-07-14 12:08:45 +0000 UTC]

i just love it...

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Magicman1998 In reply to giveyourheartawish [2012-07-14 14:14:54 +0000 UTC]

thank you I'm glad you liked it!!

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nxslove [2012-07-14 01:08:34 +0000 UTC]

This is tragically beautiful, Magicman

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Magicman1998 In reply to nxslove [2012-07-14 03:57:16 +0000 UTC]

thanks for reading it!!!

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nxslove In reply to Magicman1998 [2012-07-14 05:20:38 +0000 UTC]

no problem, I really enjoyed it. Nice work.

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Magicman1998 In reply to nxslove [2012-07-14 05:21:16 +0000 UTC]

thanks for reading!

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nxslove In reply to Magicman1998 [2012-07-26 07:20:17 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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pandoras-masquerade [2012-07-12 22:41:28 +0000 UTC]

aw this is so sweet and heart breaking!

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Magicman1998 In reply to pandoras-masquerade [2012-07-13 01:15:04 +0000 UTC]

thanks for reading it!!!!

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pandoras-masquerade In reply to Magicman1998 [2012-07-13 02:17:24 +0000 UTC]

no problem! u did a great job!

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Magicman1998 In reply to pandoras-masquerade [2012-07-13 02:18:58 +0000 UTC]

your just to kind!!!!!!!

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pandoras-masquerade In reply to Magicman1998 [2012-07-13 02:21:59 +0000 UTC]

haha no, you are really good keep writing! i can't wait to look at your stuff when i get more time! poetry is a love of mine and i get excited when i find a really good writer

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Magicman1998 In reply to pandoras-masquerade [2012-07-13 02:23:29 +0000 UTC]

i said it once god bless you!!!!!!

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pandoras-masquerade In reply to Magicman1998 [2012-07-13 02:48:20 +0000 UTC]

and god bless you too!

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