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Published: 2009-04-25 11:04:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 300; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 5
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i have found the flawin god's seams.
you see,
it seems he
may be capable
of wonderous things ...
of beautiful visions
of upside-down kisses
and existence
in black, oily spots
on cement.
of terrifying fog
and mistifying lights.
of stars,
dancing through the sky
on a wonderous night.
of the transcendence of time
and the vastness of space.
and feelings
that no other god could replace.
it seems
god is capable
of wonderous things,
but for some reason he remains,
incapable of apologies.
Comments: 1
Your style is very good, I enjoy your play on words and the general return to darkness of lines such as
"of beautiful visions
of upside-down kisses
and existence
in black, oily spots
on cement."
Despite DA not generally giving much notice to Poets and Writers, keep submitting, you've received a new watcher.
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