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Mage-of-the-Small — Had Things Been Different

Published: 2018-02-20 22:08:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 220; Favourites: 11; Downloads: 0
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Description Rabbitbite came to his paws, stepping away from Sootstar and looking quietly at his defeated opponent. His heart was still beating hard, his limbs loose from the sparring match. It was almost too good to be true; it was vindication, surely a sign from StarClan— he had beaten the leader of that hated Clan, with his own paws. He held his chin high, waiting for Sootstar to speak.

“You know, I always admired you. Next time, don’t go easy on me.” The black tom had a light smile on his face, clearly trying to make a joke.

Rabbitbite's insides rebelled. Sootstar, deputy of Gorsestar, did not get to make jokes at him; Sootstar, former Clanmate, had always admired him; Sootstar, loser in battle, was making a joke; Sootstar, Clan leader, was losing gracefully. Rabbitbite stared at him, unable to react, even in shock. A lightning-speed internal argument raged within him. His better self spoke in Her voice and pleaded for reconciliation; his bitter self raged that he ought to spit on the ground and leave. He struggled for a few heartbeats before managing to make words come to his lips:

“I don’t like what you stand for," Rabbitbite meowed in a low tone, "I don’t like how you got where you are, and I don’t like your Clan, but you… you’re fine. And, had things been different, I think she would have liked you too.”

Rabbitbite turned and vanished into the crowd to await the next match. He couldn't stand to stay in proximity with Sootstar for another heartbeat; he needed to clear his head, or at least distract himself.
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Rabbitbite belongs to me
Sootstar belongs to pvzzle  
Crowd cats, left to right:
Lupinebriar Shatterhowl
Coppershade Greatdane45  
Applepaw communiists
Coalflare Hatterbunny  
Oakfall PenyiarWolff  
Quailfeather StolenBlade-x  
Crooktail Shatterhowl
Bearpaw frickinkey

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Comments: 7

StolenKiwi [2018-02-23 14:46:52 +0000 UTC]

Oooh!! This is really good!! And thank you for adding my birb child~

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Mage-of-the-Small In reply to StolenKiwi [2018-02-23 15:17:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! And of course, she's really fun to draw!

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StolenKiwi In reply to Mage-of-the-Small [2018-02-23 17:42:55 +0000 UTC]

No problem! and im glad ^,^

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KiraKats [2018-02-21 02:11:59 +0000 UTC]

ahh! this looks so great!! QwQ I love crowd scenes dfhajklfd you made everyone looks super great!! Im sure everyone is gonna love this <33

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Mage-of-the-Small In reply to KiraKats [2018-02-21 03:27:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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Shatterhowl [2018-02-21 00:44:06 +0000 UTC]

Hey there! Can I first start off by saying thank you so much from he bottom of my heart for drawing both of my boys? AhHH! You drew them both so lovely and also the others as well. You nailed all of their designs even Oakfall's! I love the emotion and interaction in this piece, to really frames out tight-knit community and the way the cats feel about each other in personality. It's honestly adorable, I know you put a lot of time and effort in the piece, it's very gorgeous! Personally, I can't wait to see how all these characters develop together and I really wonder, honestly, how Rabbitbite's development is going to go. He's really vengeful so I can't wait!  

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Mage-of-the-Small In reply to Shatterhowl [2018-02-21 01:58:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! I'm really touched by your appreciation of it <3 I loved drawing Crooktail, there's something about his design I can't pin down but I love it. Lupine is also so pretty (though he was harder to draw, haha). It was completely worth the effort to draw them all and I can't say how much your comment really warms me up! Thank you again, really!

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