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Description .....and in the end, I only somewhat like how the characters themselves turned out. Yay for a completely bullshitted background

And so once more, the thumb looks SOOO promising, while the real thing is... *sigh* Oh well.

Funny thing about this picture. The sketch was first doodled out to celebrate return of KaguYuka in the roleplay. Now, it's a goodbye.

Houraisan Kaguya, Kazami Yuka (Touhou Project) (c) ZUN
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Ma-ze-ru In reply to ??? [2021-11-06 07:38:42 +0000 UTC]

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fenixspirit368 [2009-12-15 22:42:38 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


It has potantial
This is absolutetly beautiful. I do really like the style and the colors. It does have nice details and shading
the hair, clothing, flowers and eyes look awesome.
Your style is awesome indeed. I've seen it many times
this goes to my faves as usual.
Well you requested a critique, I'm giving you a good one.

Keep it up Olivia, your awesome and stuff
Say this is my first time giving critiques, hooray for premium accs and stuff

It's sad since KaguYuka ended in the RP, it was a nice pairing °^°, My favorite there to be honest.

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Ma-ze-ru In reply to fenixspirit368 [2009-12-18 10:13:54 +0000 UTC]

To be honest, I initially thought of hitting a "unfair" button on this critique. Too much praise, hahaha... but then I hoped that maybe others will think it's too praising too (which also was a false hope)... anyway.

Thank you so much for the kind words, Lyri ;u; And for taking your time to actually write out a crit for me ♥ You know how hard it is nowadays to get a good comment on the artwork 8<

And you have NO idea how sad it is for me that it ended 8< Though, haha, I can't believe so many people actually liked it there. "The only legit pairing of TouhouRP", eh... I love you guys lD ♥

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fenixspirit368 In reply to Ma-ze-ru [2009-12-18 17:41:21 +0000 UTC]

I see you're just being hard on yourself, but it's good you want to improve your art, I've seen people making like, uber realistic pics and stuff, Idk if you also want to reach that level, but right now you're doing awesome stuff you know, just look at my crap, though im getting better(though i should really practice lineart alot).
Nice job, keep it up, Ilu2~

plus, I can't just not use the sub, i've been whining about not having one alot |D, so I have to use it as much as I can

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confuzed-anime-fan [2011-08-02 16:44:18 +0000 UTC]

That's an odd pairing... '3'

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Ma-ze-ru In reply to confuzed-anime-fan [2011-08-29 07:11:32 +0000 UTC]

I get that a lot haha;

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NaturesRose [2011-04-27 10:19:00 +0000 UTC]

It's not bad at all, it looks great!


~And it's so sad to hear about this couple's end D8 ~

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Ma-ze-ru In reply to NaturesRose [2011-04-27 14:18:33 +0000 UTC]

A-aaah thank you! >///<

It's not /exactly/ over... well, at least not in my head. It's just that Kaguya's roleplayer changed, so... Yuka still doesn't know though; Eeeh that thing is kinda complicated, I don't even... XD

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NaturesRose In reply to Ma-ze-ru [2011-04-28 00:02:05 +0000 UTC]

Ohh, okay XD .

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MrXliSam [2010-07-22 20:37:02 +0000 UTC]

kaguya: well... we may never see eachother again ('cause i'm in my room MNORPGing, LIKE A NEET ) but we will never forget eachother... (and being a bigger neet i just reminded that from kingdom hearts )

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AlbinoGrimby [2010-05-27 05:35:19 +0000 UTC]

For a "completely bullshitted background" I think it looks good and definitely way better than some of my non-existent backgrounds.

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mirukinousagi [2010-05-27 05:13:18 +0000 UTC]

amazing i love it

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xlipepijn [2010-01-24 21:17:02 +0000 UTC]

beautiful
(i'm have more jealousy in me then parsee right now XD)

looks like yuka is going to sleep for another 60 years ;_;

kaguya: i'll be waiting...

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Ma-ze-ru In reply to xlipepijn [2010-02-10 20:00:43 +0000 UTC]

Yuka: Ha, as IF! Stupid NEET, you wouldn't survive a day without me anymore, would you? I'm not going to let you go back to eating only cup noodles!

Kaguya: >A<

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xlipepijn In reply to Ma-ze-ru [2010-02-10 20:11:07 +0000 UTC]

XD

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Eirin-Yagokoro [2009-12-18 02:14:07 +0000 UTC]

PFFFFF WHAT ARE YOU JUST SAYING ..


This pic is awesome D:.... pfff i wish i could paint like that ,i suck at bg o3o.

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Ma-ze-ru In reply to Eirin-Yagokoro [2009-12-18 09:48:47 +0000 UTC]

kjfbsdfd I SEE A TOUHOU STALKING ME oAo *shotdown*

*cough* Thank you~♥

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angelduelist153 [2009-12-17 02:40:25 +0000 UTC]

Waaa~ this is so beautiful *.* I've seen a big improvement in your work recently. You've been doing really well with using dark values. =3 And what a fantastic background! Nice work, keep it up

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Ma-ze-ru In reply to angelduelist153 [2009-12-17 07:41:04 +0000 UTC]

Haha, is that so~? Well, I guess that's what i get for spending pretty much all the time i have on drawing, ahaha... What's with people liking the background, srsly. I hate how the flowers turned out lD;

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angelduelist153 In reply to Ma-ze-ru [2009-12-18 20:27:12 +0000 UTC]

Well, even if little details aren't perfect, it's the composition as a whole that makes the big impact. I think the artist who made the piece always pays more attention to the details than the viewers do. xD

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Hernan6000 [2009-12-17 00:44:09 +0000 UTC]

amazing i love it

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Ma-ze-ru In reply to Hernan6000 [2009-12-17 05:56:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you~♥

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Jatts-Art [2009-12-16 23:59:44 +0000 UTC]

I love it!

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Ma-ze-ru In reply to Jatts-Art [2009-12-17 05:56:36 +0000 UTC]

Glad you do ♥

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zetsubougirl [2009-12-16 23:51:24 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful

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Aohime [2009-12-16 16:04:48 +0000 UTC]

ALSO ONE MORE THING *feels a deviantART ban coming*
Do you mind if I save this picture to my desktop, as a wallpaper?~<3

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Ma-ze-ru In reply to Aohime [2009-12-16 18:59:44 +0000 UTC]

Mmmm nah, as long as you don't upload it as your desktop anywhere and don't distribute the picture, it's fine~
Though hurr, I'm using it as my wallpaper myself, haha XDDD

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Aohime In reply to Ma-ze-ru [2009-12-16 19:04:30 +0000 UTC]

Lol, no, I won't |D I left it as it is, and it's brightening up my desktop, hurr ;u;
... by the way, do you know who is giving subscriptions for the THRP members? I'm not so sure if for just the THRP members - but for example, Nazi, Okuu, Mobo, and me got one. AND THE ONE WHO GAVE IT IS ANONYMUS. *shot*

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Ma-ze-ru In reply to Aohime [2009-12-16 19:55:35 +0000 UTC]

Goodie then -u-

Hurr... I know some. No idea about others >A>

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Aohime In reply to Ma-ze-ru [2009-12-17 17:47:47 +0000 UTC]

... and who do you knooowww.

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Ma-ze-ru In reply to Aohime [2009-12-17 19:39:59 +0000 UTC]

Not telling~

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Aohime [2009-12-16 16:03:47 +0000 UTC]

Nah. BACK TO SPAMMING~<3 *master spark'd*
Olivia, I knew, I FUCKING KNEW that this piece is going to pown your gallery. I mean, seriously, everything comes to my mind, are the words: beauty. love. Respect.
I love everything on this picture. The background. Those flowers fit the story between these two. The clothes... asdfghjkl, you killed my eyes - in a good way. *A*
THE HAIR. *steals* I always envied your shading skills on the hair, and face ;u; *shot*
I know that I'm always very boring with my fanon about your works, but meh. You made my day better, seriously

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Ma-ze-ru In reply to Aohime [2009-12-18 09:52:08 +0000 UTC]

"pown" *giggles*
Ahahaha, that's a really good thing that it brought forth so many positive reactions from people~~ I was mainly expecting a "wtf" reaction to the pairing, mainly from Touhoufags, but lack of it is rather pleasing. Shows that, maybe, just maybe, this pairing has a chance in the fandom *u*
And lol yeah, you go way too fangirl on my works XDDD *huggles*

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Aohime In reply to Ma-ze-ru [2009-12-18 10:53:40 +0000 UTC]

B-but it's not my fault... ;A; *shot for being a fangirl*

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hikuragi [2009-12-16 14:31:19 +0000 UTC]

Nice work >_< I really like it... Well, I'll probably write a critique after my exam if I didn't get lazy >A>

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Ma-ze-ru In reply to hikuragi [2009-12-16 19:04:21 +0000 UTC]

Ahaha, take it easy... and once more, good luck ;u; ♥

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hikuragi [2009-12-16 14:31:14 +0000 UTC]

Nice work >_< I really like it... Well, I'll probably write a critique after my exam if I didn't get lazy >A>

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hikuragi In reply to hikuragi [2009-12-16 14:31:55 +0000 UTC]

...wtf plz...... damn you fail Internet >A>

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Aohime [2009-12-16 14:15:04 +0000 UTC]

... ;A; *is going to spam this deviation with love, but brb, keeping an eye on this mischievous niece*

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Utenka [2009-12-16 14:08:23 +0000 UTC]

cuuuuuuudo! *_*
a ja tylko tak przypomnę o swoim istnieniu

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Ma-ze-ru In reply to Utenka [2009-12-16 20:01:46 +0000 UTC]

Ahahaha, gome, gome... dostaniesz GuShiru na święta, nie bój żaby ♥ Po prostu z tym wszystkim co się ostanio w TouhouRP działo, musiałam to-to dokończyć ;u;

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Utenka In reply to Ma-ze-ru [2009-12-16 20:25:07 +0000 UTC]

Jee! pod choinkę dostanę mój ukochany paring! xD

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Ma-ze-ru In reply to Utenka [2009-12-16 20:31:56 +0000 UTC]

Hurhur a i owszem~♥

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Utenka In reply to Ma-ze-ru [2009-12-16 20:46:25 +0000 UTC]

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Evaniela [2009-12-16 13:18:08 +0000 UTC]

KaguYuka! I tak narzekasz, tło jest ładne, ale najpierw i tak myślałam że chyba będzie tam więcej słoneczników, a tymczasem...nie ma żadnego XD Kolory są piękne, Kagyua ma piękne włosy ;u; Fav~!

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Ma-ze-ru In reply to Evaniela [2009-12-16 20:00:37 +0000 UTC]

Phi, nie przy tym pairingu XD Amaryllisy to tak jakby.... pairingowe kwiaty w tym przypadku XD Wszystko przez taki jeden roleplay... powinnaś kiedyś była chyba nawet widzieć z niego logi. A tak poza tym, to słoneczniki to kwiaty-zabójcy. Za chuj nie potrafię ich narysować ;^;
Hurhur kolory to chyba moja ulubiona rzecz. Włosy Kags mi się tu zbytnio nie podobają... ale kocham jak mi ubrania wyszły ;u;

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Evaniela In reply to Ma-ze-ru [2009-12-16 21:46:24 +0000 UTC]

Co racja to racja, ale tego loga widocznie nie pamiętam, a teraz mam nawet stare pliki zablokowane żeby sprawdzić, bo coś tam od ciebie miałam ;u; Oż, potrafisz narysować słoneczniki, tylko o tym nie wiesz o! Ja dobrze wiem że ty tylko mówisz że nie potrafisz tego zrobić. Może, nie idealnie, ale potrafisz! >D
Stroje wyszły też bosko, ale ja i tak jestem za włosami Kags, bo po prostu przykuwają moją uwagę, duh. Na ubrania zwróciłam uwagę na samym początku C:

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Midorinyao [2009-12-16 12:02:03 +0000 UTC]

Yuka~ OwO

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Ma-ze-ru In reply to Midorinyao [2009-12-16 19:04:53 +0000 UTC]

Indeed~ o u o

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LinTimeHero [2009-12-16 01:44:14 +0000 UTC]

your really good

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