SanguineEpitaph [2011-02-01 19:11:08 +0000 UTC]
Aw, this photomanip is really cute! From the thumbnail, I couldn't tell if it was something surreal, but now I can see! I love that the focus is on the baby in the scale -- something adorable. The message isn't hard to find at all, and you haven't distracted us from the point of the deviation. There are some things I would like to offer feedback on, though. The main thing is that without the title of the deviation, I really wouldn't know what the message was. I would probably immediately think, "Why is there a baby being weighed?" So, maybe making the message more apparent within the actual deviation would help.
Also, I bet there are some awesome brushes or effects to add some texture to the basket the baby is in. Right now, it looks really good and fluffy, like down feathers! I just think that the left side has less texture than the right.
Overall, very nice manip. I think you've done well, just some feedback that I mentioned above.
Additionally, did you use stock from deviantART? Just as a suggestion, usually the artists whose art you do use want you to link back to their page. Just a thought.
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