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Lunicea — Hay Doll
#funny #goof #hay #wolf
Published: 2017-12-01 03:52:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 266; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 0
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Description
Meet Aspen!! Shes is one of my OC's and as you can tell she is quite the goof.Related content
Comments: 8
I love the attention to detail in this piece! While I think all the parts are there, Everything is a little blurry. I'm not sure if this is due to the fact that you used the blur tool in the program you are using or if this is the way the brush tool is you were using.
I believe refining a few details could make this piece great! The cows and such in the background are a nice touch, and background elements don't always need refined, but I'd love to see some cleaner lines on the hay (I really like the texture, so I think the brush is appropriate, as long as it can be used for cleaner lines!).
In terms of composition, I think you could have spread the stacks of hay in the background out among the field. Most farmers just dump the stack whenever it finishes, and while the lineup would look nice and organized, spread out would be more realistic conceptually.
While the texture is good on the hay, I believe the clouds needed a texture brush 
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Thank you! And I did the hay the way that ours on our farm are lined, which is very neat.
And yes I need a bigger brush selection, though Krita is too laggy for me and I can't quite pay a monthly subscription to anything.
Thank you for the response!
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Welp, never send her to kill a calf XD this will happen.
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Composition
I think in this piece the way you positioned the character is ok, and i like that the horizon is almost at the top of the picture - unusual! The dynamic is a bit disturbed by that blur you added - i think it would have worked to portray perspective if not for these sudden non-blur cows on the left. To further add to the illusion of perspective i also suggest maybe muting the colors near the horizon? That field stretching so far can't be consistent in color.
Colors
Overall i like the color scheme, the hay and the grass look nice, and Aspen has natural looking fur color.
Character
She is a goof indeed! Very cute scene of her hiding in the hay <3 I do think she could use some subtle markings - while the colors are very nice, but right now she is only defined by her playfulness.
Piece
It is quite clear that you didn't spend enough time on details - it looks sketchy (if thats the intended effect then its ok!) and you took a bit of a shortcut with the perspective here... And i know that blur is tricky to use, but it's a tad too much of it here, almost everything is a bit smudged. But overall, this deviation leaves a nice impression, playful wolf, so cute! Good job, lots of inspiration to you!
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Yeah, didn't turn out quite the way I wanted but the only blend tool on my program is blur -_('-')_-
Also, Aspen does have some markings but they aren't placed where she is positioned here, they are mainly on her back and the backs of her ears.
Thank you for taking the time to comment!
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