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Published: 2015-01-09 02:59:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 1541; Favourites: 100; Downloads: 0
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Hi babies!this is my oc Michi and her pet Lulu.
I tried to find a way to color a full body!!
I think it turned out okay for a first time of this character!
Hope you like it!
Michi (c) Me
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Comments: 25
I think her legs are a little too short for her head size...or something is off, not quite sure what. The colors are nice though, and the detail in the food. Watch out where you place objects, the pink macaroon creates a tangent with her hand.
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This is cute. x3 Especially the sheep~
I also like how you designed the character, it's lovely. ^-^
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I was directed here by a poll on Hinausa 's account.
This is a perfectly darling image. It's a very good drawing in the anime style. The only thing about the image that gives me pause with respect to that is with the rears in the eyes, and only because the way that the tear is bubbled up within the bottom of the eye to the left of frame. Since it obscures the eye slightly, it makes the eye appear awkward. Perhaps having it a little less of a perfect bubble shape?
Since you mentioned this is the first time you've colored this character in this way, let me say that you've done an absolutely marvelous job of it! I don't see any bleeding from one portion of the character to another. There's no color bleed from the clothing to the skin, or vice versa. It's done beautifully.
Another thing I like about this piece is the shadows. They all follow the same light source, and they keep a defined shape. I also like the subtlety of having the lines in her skirt and the heart of her apron in a frantic wavy pattern as opposed to the lines in the upper part of her dress and her hair bow. It reflects the loss of control of tripping over the sheep very nicely. The detail in the food on the tray is wonderfully done as well. I especially like the strawberry that's flying up into the air.
With respect to the poor sheep, you've done a wonderful job of showing her emotion. Not only in the tears falling from her eyes, but also in her droopy ear and the mouth open on a gasp of surprised pain.
I do like this piece, and I would love to see it with a full background if you ever choose to add one to it. Thank you for sharing this.
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Thank you for the comment but I never asked for a critique.
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Just because you don't ask for one doesn't mean you won't receive one. Please be aware of that when you're submitting to the site. If you don't want critiques, I suggest you make a note of it in your artist's comments.
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Yes. But if I wanted one I would have asked for one in the artist section.
I meant no ill.
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I admit I'm surprised by the complaint of receiving a detailed, almost entirely positive comment. I find it strange, and I took this:
I tried to find a way to color a full body!!
I think it turned out okay for a first time of this character!
I hope you like it!
to be inviting commentary. I try not to leave empty praise - if I like something, I want to tell the artist/author why I like it because that helps them. (And I can tell you that anyone who knows me irl would be shocked that I like this because it's pink.) At least, that's how I've always viewed it.
I believe constructive comments can help even seasoned artists continue to grow. And the biggest complaint I've seen among artists and writers alike is the "fav without comment" or "the comment is mostly empty", so I do my best not to contribute to either of those.
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Sorry if I was rude. But I am thankful for the long comment none the less.
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ahhh' she's a darling~ and those SHOES *v*
((i love how you draw desserts too!))
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r-really? I had no idea how to draw desserts, I need to get better, but thank you so much!!!! -sobs-
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no problem at all!!
practice makes perfect~
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neeeeeuuu thankies babu!
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yup, she does not like being tripped over!
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