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Published: 2016-01-28 15:56:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 1062; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 1
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A short story done by pen and lettering in Photoshop.Next:Β lucky1717123.deviantart.com/arβ¦
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I know I don't usually do things like this, but I hope I can do something like this more in the future
Hope you will like it ^^
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Comments: 20
I am liking this.
Sorry, I've been on hiatus.
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This seems like there is a subtle dark theme to it >_<
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I think you can handle this
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This seems like it will be interesting, it has a nice mystery/horror feel.
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This is starting to sound like those horror games.
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I'm going to help you with your English for a second, It's perfect untill the last speach buble, change "for you to went out" to "for you to go out" but other than that good job! I love the art style by the way!
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I had correct it thank you for letting me know about this
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No problem, happy to help! ^_^
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uuuuuu i like =o also the candle is very cute ^^
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a better wording for that last speech bubble would be either "For when you go out" or "For you to go out"
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Thank you Β for letting me knowing it Β
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should be "for you to go out"
creepy. interested to see more.
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Thank you , I correct it ^^
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