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LouPup — :CE: Enchanted Forest
Published: 2012-07-31 09:39:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 812; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 8
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My 2nd entry for *KittyKatFangs 's contest! Gosh I loved doing this! It was soooo fuuun!! And Laika is such an epical character, I'll definitely be drawing her again, plus, *KittyKatFangs is a seriously epic artist XDBTW, I REALLY DON'T KNOW WHAT THE YELLOW LIGHTS ARE.... THEY'RE JUST... YELLOW LIGHTS XD
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Comments: 33
Vision: 4.5
You obviously knew what you were doing. You visualized the scene pretty good e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="19" height="19" alt="
Originality 3.5
Not extremely unique, since I have seen some artists doing about the same thing before you -not giving out names- but well you still get a few stars because it's still great XD
Technique: 5
You got the technique bro, you knew how to do the (uhm fireflies/ magic lights/ ftw/ idk) and the grass. You just know how to do it. Congrats e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let… " width="15" height="15" alt="
Impact: 4
Yup, the impact is hard ;u; it look BOOTIFUL.
But the characters look too flat and it destroys the impact somehow e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="19" height="19" alt="
OVERALL:
The characters look slightly slat but the poses are great. The noses are too big, be careful; Big noses just smash the cuteness! The dog on the right's neck fur looks like quick scribbles, as well as it's butt fur and tail fur.
It's back pas should be a bit more like -> \ since it's jumping. But I still love it and it rocks badly lol. Nice work dude.
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Thanks so much for the critique!! Imma keep all this in mind next time I draw something, so thanks!! <33
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I shall begin with le background. I think for the feeling and atmosphere you were try to achive here, you should have made the back background (the light blue) a bit darker to give it an enchanted and mystical feel, but I must say that the way the trees where drawn is super effective!
Now, the second dog or the one to your right (Whatever floats your boat) her body looks odd. Her or his back legs need to be further back because you can't leap forward while your legs are pushing you up. But a side from that it is totally adorable. Also the other dog is perfect and very cute.
The little fireflies give a nice effect and look great.
I apologise for any typos and hope I wasn't too harsh e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="19" height="19" alt="
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WOW!! THANKS SO MUCH for the critique!! XD
I shall keep the back leg anatomy in mind, I gotta practise my anatomy more XD
Thanks again for the critique!! I really appreciate you taking the time to write something like this <3
YOU WEREN'T NEARLY TOO HARSH!! XD
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YEY.
no
problems Lou
Oh good (:
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I love it! <3
but noted me about something I think I should share with you
this was Okalie's entry, [link]
and she informed me that the poses BG and lighting were very similar, if you had no idea then dont worry about it c:
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glad you do! c:
Oh, I didn't copy it, if thats what you think. I sketched this a few days ago, it was actually going to be a pic of my Lou and Dog, but then I gave Dog pointy ears and turned her into Laika XD Sorry if it looks the same c:
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oh no its fine ! I love it<3
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OMG WOOWWWW <333 YOU MUST WIN >:I LA SO LET IT BE SAID SO LET IT BE DONE
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AWW THANKS SO MUCH AZTEC!! <333333
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No problem this is so amazing ;w;
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I'm sorry to say but...
This is too epic for my eyes and you killed me with epicosity *w*
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OMG THANKS SO SO MUCH BLUEYYYY!! 
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SO EPICALY AWESOME AND CUTE!!
But it still looks exactly like my style!! ;o;
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THANKYA VERY MUCH YOUNG DOG!! XD
I know, but could you do me a quick favour, and list the things that look the same?
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XD WELCOME!!
Sure
Eyes
Muzzle style
The way the fur comes down from the ear to the back
And it's just the face style looks like mine all the body is your own ;w;
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