Comments: 25
Batgirl2013 [2013-05-26 19:07:15 +0000 UTC]
I like your poem and the description helps figure out what goes on in your head. As one who has those thoughts - we always have something to stop us
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Batgirl2013 In reply to lostmyslef [2013-05-26 22:43:38 +0000 UTC]
I actually liked it- if its like that for all your poems I think it better
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kiki1690 [2013-05-23 22:16:54 +0000 UTC]
quite wonderful especially the last line. very good!
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ReniBear [2013-05-21 16:56:02 +0000 UTC]
that is a wonderful poem. it describes me and this girl.. very much so. so beautiful this poem is.
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ReniBear In reply to lostmyslef [2013-05-22 13:33:13 +0000 UTC]
You are very welcome ^^
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MagicalJoey [2013-05-21 15:00:57 +0000 UTC]
Long descriptions are good love.
And the poem is not awful. It is well written and there is an excellent theme and reason behind it. I may just write something on the theme myself.
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lostmyslef In reply to MagicalJoey [2013-05-22 10:14:06 +0000 UTC]
Thank you and I'm sure that would be wonderful
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Belle95 [2013-05-20 22:01:42 +0000 UTC]
I didn't think it was awful. I liked it. It wasn't too verbose and it got across the story while still lending emotion and empathy.
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lostmyslef In reply to Belle95 [2013-05-21 09:31:23 +0000 UTC]
well thank you
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artistic-heart13 [2013-05-20 14:13:52 +0000 UTC]
Amazing job as usual. Like the irony in the last lines.
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RemnantDoomBlossom [2013-05-19 18:08:20 +0000 UTC]
Wow, this was an amazing poem. And your abilities are great by the way! This turned out great! Its definitely a connectable poem.
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RemnantDoomBlossom In reply to lostmyslef [2013-05-19 18:30:28 +0000 UTC]
Well you did a great job of making it relatable! I would favorite it twice if I could.
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Miuru-chan [2013-05-19 16:49:50 +0000 UTC]
This is a pretty poem. And there is a very strong emotion.
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WalkingDeceit [2013-05-19 14:00:29 +0000 UTC]
I really like this, particularly the last two lines. I think that it has a very powerful message that a lot of people can really connect with.
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lostmyslef In reply to WalkingDeceit [2013-05-19 18:07:21 +0000 UTC]
O thank you, i was actually nervous about the last lines
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