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losing-wieght — Losing : Day 2

Published: 2008-06-02 22:49:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 262; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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Description Day 2
Weight : 87kg/174pounds

In the mirror, there lives a girl
Sometimes I peek and smile at her
And she smiles back at me and sometimes she waves
With her green eyes, and nice blonde hair

But I always thought something was wrong
With the confidence she have she look so strong
With a loud laughter, talking just full of life
Behind the glass, she wanted a place to belong

I knew the secret that no one else knows
How inside she feels, how she is at loss
For words to describe how she feels, what goes through her mind
She can’t show her weakness, she can’t meet my eyes

Hang on there, Mirror girl, don’t cry
Hang on there, my girl, don’t cry
Hang on there, I’ll be your girl, so don’t cry
I’ll be watching you girl
I’ll always love you girl
I’ll always believe you girl
Don’t cry, girl
Don’t cry …..
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Comments: 9

Soo-Me [2008-06-21 17:42:00 +0000 UTC]

very sweeeet

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frogeyedape [2008-06-04 19:23:57 +0000 UTC]

you're an awesome writer...I thought I maybe had a spark of talent but its blown out in the presence of your fire

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losing-wieght In reply to frogeyedape [2008-06-05 09:44:36 +0000 UTC]

awww! u r really embaressing me ><
i don't think my work is good! but i really love yours! it's really amazing! and i'm sure you are much more talented! because your work comes from a real writer !

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frogeyedape In reply to losing-wieght [2008-06-05 20:12:53 +0000 UTC]

no really, your stuff is great. really, really radical

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Punkie-O [2008-06-03 09:33:50 +0000 UTC]

omg u lost two pounds yaaaaaay!
I'm sooo proud of you!!!!
keep up the good work love !
and you're so talented masha'allah!
for writing such a poem!
I wish i had the time and your talent to write!
^o^ Go You for losin 2 pounds, insha'allah at that rate your going to be in the 160's on next monday!
yaay you!!
i'm really happy~
DON'T GIVE UP!
and there is no need to thank me love
I've gone through the same things that you're going through right now. and there were only few people who supported me!
<3 keep up the good work and staaay strong love <3

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losing-wieght In reply to Punkie-O [2008-06-03 10:00:13 +0000 UTC]

I KNOWW! i'm so happy i did!!! i'm so glad! ^o^
and it's all thanks to u ! u ket me strong!!
and i'll try my best from now on!
inshallah i'll be able to kee losing weight ! thank u very much!
and i'm glad u like what i write , i feel that it's kinda cheesy XP but i don't claim to be a good writer, i just write whatever i can!
i'd love to read something u write! whatever it is! actually i'm already a big fan of your comments<3
it really feels great to be supported by someone who had my experience
thank u again hun! i'll keep strong!

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Punkie-O In reply to losing-wieght [2008-06-03 10:46:09 +0000 UTC]

awwww
ur soo sweeet

lol if u read what i write you'll die...when i was in the 7th grade...I didn't perfect Arabic yet.
so at my school everyone was writing Arabic poems...and I was soo jealous of them..and I felt left out.
So, I came back home and wrote a poem in Arabic AND OMG IT WAS HILARIOUS !
and i thought it was good...I wonder where is that notebook...I lost it long time ago lol XD
and yeah..you're good !
xxxxx

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losing-wieght In reply to Punkie-O [2008-06-03 11:14:00 +0000 UTC]

aww! i wanna reda ur arabic poem!! even if it was hilirious i bet it's cute! u must find that notebook XD
i really want to try writing poems in arabic coz i really love arabic , but it's harder, and i'm not even agood writer >< so maybe if my english poems went okay i'd try writing in arabic coz it'sa beautiful language for me <3
and again! i'd love to read something u wrote! and thanks for everything!

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Punkie-O In reply to losing-wieght [2008-06-03 16:02:14 +0000 UTC]

hehe u shud give it a try then
I'll post it as soon as i find it

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